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  • Dance2muse

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    Have you abandoned this story? I really hope not Sad
    June 19th, 2013 at 12:08am
  • jazter

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    Cute update! I like the design elements of the story, really fleshes it out.
    March 27th, 2013 at 06:21pm
  • Penguins11

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    Aww poor Jare! He's gotta make a move on Bri and fast! Loved the chapter :)
    March 19th, 2013 at 04:40am
  • Cupcake1

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    Great chapter!!
    March 17th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • Penguins11

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    Aww I absolutely loved this chapter! Poor Jared's just a mess (Which he does while being absolutely lovable!) The rest of the Staals are awesome, and I can't wait to see what is going to happen!! :)
    March 5th, 2013 at 09:21pm
  • Penguins11

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    I can't wait!! Haha, I definitely love Jordan in this story - he's too adorable! And hopefully Jared isn't going to work himself to death with this new workout routine he's got going on.... :S Can't wait to see the reunion!!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 04:11am
  • amykart

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    I'm excited to see Bri and Jared interact :)
    February 28th, 2013 at 11:37am
  • rehbein

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    Yay! Can't wait to read the interactions!
    February 28th, 2013 at 04:25am
  • penschick8771

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    really like this story so far
    can't wait to read more :)
    please update soon :)
    February 27th, 2013 at 05:00am
  • komula1216

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    A- I love Rascal Flatts, it helps that they're from the great state of Ohio ;)

    B- Can't wait to read more, great start so far.
    February 27th, 2013 at 03:58am
  • Penguins11

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    I can't wait for this! You know I'm a total sucker for Jared Staal, and this story sounds so interesting! Can't wait for more!
    February 26th, 2013 at 04:42pm
  • amykart

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    I adore this story! Update soon :)
    February 25th, 2013 at 09:10pm
  • ShortAndLovingIt

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    It's really interesting so far. I just have one comment about when you change the Point of view: maybe you can put Asterisks (****) or say "Jared's POV" when you change the views because I was really confused when you suddenly changed it without any indication. Other than that, I really like the story so far! Keep updating! :)
    February 25th, 2013 at 05:06am
  • rehbein

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    I am enjoying the little bits of mystery you are teasing us with!
    February 25th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • Cupcake1

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    Can't wait for more!
    February 25th, 2013 at 04:52am
  • van Riemsdyk

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    i really like this so far and i'm glad you've finally started it! i hope you can get another update up soon!
    February 25th, 2013 at 04:08am
  • amykart

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    Hi I was wondering if you were still going to do this story?
    February 13th, 2013 at 01:58am
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