Don't Tell - Comments

So goood!
Love it!

It's so.sad knowing the after because this is so sweet and amazing. ;A;

Oh the writing style makes me think of my own as well, I'm not sure if you were trying for that, though.
Like you say 'the younger's' like I do a lot..
And you said 'Rory's red lips' which makes me think of Zac describing Rory's lips as russet, and stuff, 'cause he's kinda tan.
And Rory being adorable and shy... It's just perfect!
You are probably my favorite fan now :D

I've read this, like, ten times already.
I love how Matt calls him baby.
It makes me think of when Rory would think if Mart never died, they probably would have ended up together.
And this shows that well, which I think I've already said...
I liked the tongue sucking part too. Idk, I just liked that Rory did that with Matt and he clearly enjoyed it so much.
This really makes me want to mention Matt again in the sequel. Like, I have a plan now and everything. It'll be good.
Honesty, it makes me wonder what would have happened if Matt didn't die, and Zac never came along. Which is crazy because I'm in love with Zac.
As I also already mentioned, it's incredibly tragic because Rory wonders what he would do without Matt, and then in the near future Matt is going to die. So it leaves Rory and his family confused and sets up for the beatings and such.
I'll probably wind up commenting again. :3 I love it too much! GAH!

And I find it incredibly tragic, as Matt probably dies soon after this, and it's perfect. Rory loving him so much and Matt being so gentle and real- if Matt never died, Rory and him would have left and ended up together before he ever thought of Zac, and you portrayed it well. It makes my tummy twist really hard.
Then again, though, Zac and Rory are soul mates... I think I'm going to mention Matt again just because it sounds fun! (:

Oh I called it!
And I absolutely adored it.
It's literally perfect!
I mean, honestly. I'll probably go back to read it 10x :3