Hey! I love this, I came from comment swap, but this looks really cool. Your description is beautiful, and I feel like I immediately am comfortable getting to know everyone within the story. Character development is often hard to find, but I love the way you've done it so far. I've gotten to chapter three, but I'd love to continue reading :)) I laughed aloud at "canada boy" btw lol. And your layout is gorgeous! Very simple, but I love that about it. It's nice and subtle; and the birds are an interesting touch. Overall, I'd love to keep reading on! Thanks much :)
April 3rd, 2015 at 11:25pm