March 3rd, 2013 at 11:39pm
Bay Boy - Comments
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Haha yay! Finally! 100th comment :)March 3rd, 2013 at 10:09pm
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I love mila and Jordan they're so cuteMarch 3rd, 2013 at 07:08pm
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@ lexwashere22
Spicy like a chipotle burrito bowl mmm ;) thanks!March 3rd, 2013 at 06:20pm -
That was very detailed... haha it's really great, I love this story. Keep updating!March 3rd, 2013 at 06:06pm
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that was really spicy ;) haha. It was soooo good though. Jordan and Mila are so cute together.March 3rd, 2013 at 04:53pm
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*Comment Swap*
I really enjoyed reading this story! I really like milenas character. I really like the way you write. I didnt see any grammar or spelling mistakes. I subscribed :) keep up the awesome work!!March 2nd, 2013 at 01:16am -
Comment swap!
This is the first hockey fan fiction I've read, and I'm glad I did! It's very well written and I could read it all day. the only thing I have to say is that I have trouble reading things when there is no spaces between paragraphs, but. Otherwise it's wonderful :3March 1st, 2013 at 03:02am -
@ pulpxfiction
Thanks! I'll try to update todayFebruary 28th, 2013 at 08:45pm -
Mila and Jordan are so cute! I'm not a huge hockey fan, but I still really enjoyed this. Update soon?February 28th, 2013 at 08:38pm
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Mila and Jordan are so cute! I'm not a huge hockey fan, but I still really enjoyed this. Update soon?February 28th, 2013 at 08:38pm
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Keep updating. This is really good!February 28th, 2013 at 04:43am
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@ amykart
aww thanks :)February 28th, 2013 at 03:57am -
Oohh a hokey fan fiction I was reading a couple of the chapters and I do have to say that not many can pull off a hockey story as well as this. I love your strong descriptive writing and realistic dialogue. I can not wait for chapters to come, well after I catch up :D Amazingly well done!February 28th, 2013 at 02:51am
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@ Sincerely-Angela
Aw thanks! And thanks for commenting!February 28th, 2013 at 01:31am -
@ lexwashere22
Haha lex you're my favoriteFebruary 28th, 2013 at 01:24am -
I love mila and jordan haha and it's getting steamy ;)February 28th, 2013 at 12:39am
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ooooooo things are gonna go down ;)February 28th, 2013 at 12:28am
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@ MMM26
They'll figure it out, jut give it time. They've been only been dating for a little, but yeah they both have a lot to learn! I'll try to update tomorrow or the day after :)February 28th, 2013 at 12:02am -
@ amykart
Haha makes sense. They need to figure out the future. What's going to happen when she becomes a doctor? He needs to understand she can't just run to him. BUT I do love how he is so smitten by her. Absolutely adorable! Update soon?February 27th, 2013 at 11:57pm
hahaha yes ;)