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  • lexwashere22

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    @ amykart
    hahaha yes ;)
    March 3rd, 2013 at 11:39pm
  • MMM26

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    Haha yay! Finally! 100th comment :)
    March 3rd, 2013 at 10:09pm
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    I love mila and Jordan they're so cute
    March 3rd, 2013 at 07:08pm
  • amykart

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    @ lexwashere22
    Spicy like a chipotle burrito bowl mmm ;) thanks!
    March 3rd, 2013 at 06:20pm
  • maplel34fs

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    That was very detailed... haha it's really great, I love this story. Keep updating!
    March 3rd, 2013 at 06:06pm
  • lexwashere22

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    that was really spicy ;) haha. It was soooo good though. Jordan and Mila are so cute together.
    March 3rd, 2013 at 04:53pm
  • ironically1234

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    I really enjoyed reading this story! I really like milenas character. I really like the way you write. I didnt see any grammar or spelling mistakes. I subscribed :) keep up the awesome work!!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:16am
  • Fortunate Placement.

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    Comment swap!

    This is the first hockey fan fiction I've read, and I'm glad I did! It's very well written and I could read it all day. the only thing I have to say is that I have trouble reading things when there is no spaces between paragraphs, but. Otherwise it's wonderful :3
    March 1st, 2013 at 03:02am
  • amykart

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    @ pulpxfiction
    Thanks! I'll try to update today
    February 28th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • pulpxfiction

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    Mila and Jordan are so cute! I'm not a huge hockey fan, but I still really enjoyed this. Update soon?
    February 28th, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • pulpxfiction

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    Mila and Jordan are so cute! I'm not a huge hockey fan, but I still really enjoyed this. Update soon?
    February 28th, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • maplel34fs

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    Keep updating. This is really good!
    February 28th, 2013 at 04:43am
  • lexwashere22

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    @ amykart
    aww thanks :)
    February 28th, 2013 at 03:57am
  • Kiakara17

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    Oohh a hokey fan fiction I was reading a couple of the chapters and I do have to say that not many can pull off a hockey story as well as this. I love your strong descriptive writing and realistic dialogue. I can not wait for chapters to come, well after I catch up :D Amazingly well done!
    February 28th, 2013 at 02:51am
  • amykart

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    @ Sincerely-Angela
    Aw thanks! And thanks for commenting!
    February 28th, 2013 at 01:31am
  • amykart

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    @ lexwashere22
    Haha lex you're my favorite
    February 28th, 2013 at 01:24am
  • Sincerely-Angela

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    I love mila and jordan haha and it's getting steamy ;)
    February 28th, 2013 at 12:39am
  • lexwashere22

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    ooooooo things are gonna go down ;)
    February 28th, 2013 at 12:28am
  • amykart

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    @ MMM26
    They'll figure it out, jut give it time. They've been only been dating for a little, but yeah they both have a lot to learn! I'll try to update tomorrow or the day after :)
    February 28th, 2013 at 12:02am
  • MMM26

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    @ amykart
    Haha makes sense. They need to figure out the future. What's going to happen when she becomes a doctor? He needs to understand she can't just run to him. BUT I do love how he is so smitten by her. Absolutely adorable! Update soon?
    February 27th, 2013 at 11:57pm