as for the story: erm....>_> wow, i really...wasn't expecting....Pokemon beastiality from you Geoff....but it's great writing, very good. there are a few parts i suggest you revise, but other than that it's real good.
...buuuuuuuutttt....i'm still trying to get over the whole "guyXdude pokemon" thing...it's sorta weird, especially since i've no clue wtf a Lucarius (sp?) looks like...or half these damn Pokemon. O_O
as for the story: erm....>_> wow, i really...wasn't expecting....Pokemon beastiality from you Geoff....but it's great writing, very good. there are a few parts i suggest you revise, but other than that it's real good.
...buuuuuuuutttt....i'm still trying to get over the whole "guyXdude pokemon" thing...it's sorta weird, especially since i've no clue wtf a Lucarius (sp?) looks like...or half these damn Pokemon. O_O
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