New York - Comments

Wow. What a transition from start to finish. Just wow. This was incredible. The ownership of Frank at the end was just so fucking... gorgeous. It made both of them realize that they belonged to each other, even if it took some great lengths (hahaha, pun completely intended) to get there. I'm a little confused as to what struck Gerard to act in such a way... was he on something? What happened when he went away? UGH. The allure of it all, how you left us wanting more and questioning such things, it's just so perfect. I loved this so much. <3

Holy fuck, this turned me on so damn much. Fucking awesome, really.

Loved it <3

Loved it <3

I'm shaking. Oh my god, it was so good, like, I almost cried when Gerard started to cry with Frank but then I really got confused as to when Gerard went all dominant and hurtful, I didn't get it. You wrote that they'd done it once and Frank hadn't liked it, and yeah, I'm confused... I'd like to understand how these fluffy apologizes suddenly turned into a nearly-rape session haha.

So like, even though it's got me confused for the rest of my life, this was really amazingly perfect.

So good, nice job!

That's hot. And OMG. I was a little confused as to why Gerard went all psycho and committed borderline rape and physical abuse but maybe that's because my eyes were heart shaped. It was awesome and it was perfect and real. Good job. xox

That was amazing, you're a brilliant writer! Loved all the pain/pleasure stuff! very very hot!!

That was brilliant, I really loved it <3