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  • lizzicleromance

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    Wow. What a transition from start to finish. Just wow. This was incredible. The ownership of Frank at the end was just so fucking... gorgeous. It made both of them realize that they belonged to each other, even if it took some great lengths (hahaha, pun completely intended) to get there. I'm a little confused as to what struck Gerard to act in such a way... was he on something? What happened when he went away? UGH. The allure of it all, how you left us wanting more and questioning such things, it's just so perfect. I loved this so much. <3
    September 21st, 2013 at 01:54am
  • another_shapeshifter

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    Holy fuck, this turned me on so damn much. Fucking awesome, really.
    February 15th, 2013 at 03:46pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Loved it <3
    February 6th, 2013 at 12:57pm
  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    Loved it <3
    February 6th, 2013 at 12:56pm
  • firearnok

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    I'm shaking. Oh my god, it was so good, like, I almost cried when Gerard started to cry with Frank but then I really got confused as to when Gerard went all dominant and hurtful, I didn't get it. You wrote that they'd done it once and Frank hadn't liked it, and yeah, I'm confused... I'd like to understand how these fluffy apologizes suddenly turned into a nearly-rape session haha.

    So like, even though it's got me confused for the rest of my life, this was really amazingly perfect.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 12:04pm
  • OnlyTheYoung

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    So good, nice job!
    February 2nd, 2013 at 10:28pm
  • RayTorosArmy

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    That's hot. And OMG. I was a little confused as to why Gerard went all psycho and committed borderline rape and physical abuse but maybe that's because my eyes were heart shaped. It was awesome and it was perfect and real. Good job. xox
    February 2nd, 2013 at 09:07pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    That was amazing, you're a brilliant writer! Loved all the pain/pleasure stuff! very very hot!!
    February 2nd, 2013 at 08:17pm
  • ALittlePieceOfSyn

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    That was brilliant, I really loved it <3
    February 2nd, 2013 at 06:47pm