Hysteria - Comments

Omg. That was...Jesus Christ I feel naughty just reading it :)

@ Ines V.
I'm working on the next part right now! :) It gets quiiiite saucy! >:)

I've just came across your story, I'm curious about what happens next. I hope you'll update soon.

@ Jefferson Starships
Thanks for the comment, Stephanie! You're the best and I'm SO glad you enjoyed it. I'll post the next part whenever.

Hey c: so, from one writer to another, I just wanted to make a few suggestions and if you don't agree that's totally fine c: it's just constructive critiscm <3 I really think that you should add more to the plot! Be dynamic! Be creative! I'm doing a story about slaves so don't worry about anybody thinking that you're weird. Don't go into too much detail because people want to read what happens to the characters and what's going to happen not how to put on clothes. And don't be TOO cheesy. I hope this helped <3 xoxo, good luck on the story!

Considering each part gets more scandalous, I am kinda looking forward to the next update! Virginia's mannerisms are too cute, she's giddy and excitable and the way she acts is just awwwww. but I CAN'T, Martin reading your fanfiction, your Avengers fanfiction, oh my god. Like you said, lotsa people are gonna think it's kinda bizarre that a sixteen year old girl is getting with a forty one year old man, but Martin Freeman is just too cute. Good luck with the plot development, I know it's gonna get tricky since you gotta move it so fast, but I'm sure you will do fine.