Kids Are Forever - Comments

I've been reading this whole series for a few days and now you have me crying like a baby! That's not fair! I'm scared to read the next part because I don't know what you're going to do to me. This series is amazing and you are a very talented writer, but I also kind of really dislike you right now.

Literally bawled through this chapter

@ Capt. Morgan
Thank you!!! I had two of the most amazing English teachers in school that helped me. They were the kind of teachers that you hated at the start because they were so harsh but then in the end you realize they were only doing it because they actually cared. I always liked to write but never really thought I was any good but they encouraged me over and over to just keep doing it because apparently they saw something in my writing that I didn't.
But if you really like writing and want to get better just keep doing it, my first story on here 'Stuck Between A Rock And A Hard Place' is terrible, I don't like it at all, which is probably why I haven't finished it, but my more recent stories I really enjoy.
You don't necessarily have to read a lot of books (I don't) but if it helps with ideas then go for it. Also when your writing a story if you love what your writing and make it a part of your day to day thinking then it makes it easier to develop the ideas, make the characters seem more real and human without them having a bland Kristen Stewart appeal, unless that is what you are going for.

Anyways thanks again I am glad you enjoy my writing so be sure to check out my other stories, except the for-mentioned one :)

I want you to know that I have been calling you all sorts of mean names for the last few hours. I also want you to know that I didn't mean any of them. Your writing is amazing. I read all three of these stories and have fallen in love with these characters. Even the ones only introduced in this last part have a piece of my heart. I was crying by the time I got to chapter 20 and if I would have gotten to finish the story before I had to leave, I know I would have cried my eyes out. As it was, I almost made a complete fool of myself in the middle of one of the resturants on my campus. Your writing is beautiful and I can only hope to one day be able to write half as well as you. <3 <3

Again the tears just flowed and tears are flowing writing this comment for an amazing little boy and an amazing family, who taught his family so many things throughout his sickness and times before. it broke my heart when he asked his Daddy if he was going to die and that he didn't want to go to sleep and to leave the world to go to sleep for eternity from this world but to rid of all the sickness and pain to run free and play basketball forever and dying in his Daddy's and Mommy's arms he couldn't feel much more love than that and peaceful. I know most of the readers including me didn't want Clark to die but in a way not that it is ever good but it was that this happened that it put that prospective that no matter real life or a fictional stories that things like these things do happen and that happily ever after isn't always what it is wrote in fairly tales but it is our own tales that make our endings whether it is the good, bad or sad ones. Thank you for writing this sequel and you are an amazing writer and I cannot wait to read more of your stories and will always subscribe.
Love it <3

"Keep your gloves on kid...you don't have to fight anymore."

wow. I haven't cried like that in a long time
very sad couple of chapters
you did a great job writing them..

All the tears!

that was soooo sad! omg im like crying here

that was soooo sad! omg im like crying here

that was soooo sad! omg im like crying here

You sooooo made me cry here. I can't believe he died. I am just do sad.

@ Pittsburghlover58
Thank you, I love nothing more than to sit and write all day long and even when I am out my mind is all over these stories.

Comparing the chapter and the video is exactly what I wanted everyone to do, the song and video to an extent is going to help finish off the story.
But I do have something planned for the very end that you will all be sure to love.

I think a lot of us are in tears, myself included. This latest chapter, plus the video... So much to handle. I couldn't help comparing the chapter to the video. I think that was what you were aiming for, and you hit right on target. Especially at the end of the video with the last two paragraphs in the chapter, oh gosh. I'm a mess right now. Going back to your story now. As life goes on, Kate and the rest of the gang have to move on, as hard as that is going to be for them. You are a talented writer, keep writing!!! Love this!!!

I'm just laying here and the tears are running down my cheeks! This is so unbelievably sad and my heart breaking knowing how hard it is knowing that the person you love isn't going to make it through the night and saying goodbye is one of the most hardest things that will even happen in a life time, I had to say goodbye 2 years ago to two people within 2 months that was the few of the closes people to me... But when Zach said his first word and it was Clark I lost it and I know that they are all going to have a hard time dealing with it but I think Evgeni, Asher, Zach and possibly Nicky are going to take it the hardest and show it and no doubt Kate will take it even harder than all of them but she going to probably feel like she is going to have to stay strong and not let it show for her family and I don't think Evgeni is ever going to let go of the guilt he is feeling. Love it <3

NO OMG STOP. Like I'm literally in tears. Please don't let him die please?

Please let Clark live I cried when Asher had cancer if Clark dies I am going to be a mess
Let Clark live!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aww poor Clark :(

I'm pretty sure you are going to make me cry before this story is over. Good or bad outcome, there will be tears.

I don't like you anymore..I'm crying like a big tit baby... I am not likening this i don't want Clark to die...

@ Pavelkin
Ahh okay! :) I just read the chapter - didn't see that you explained that you be changing the name, when I clicked on it from my email it had the old title and that's why I was confused... Should have read the chapter first :/

Poor Clark!! I hope he's alright but Evgeni should have known better :/