Roses Painted Black - Comments

  • ivionkeybarz

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    What ever happened to The Temptress of Paris?
    December 5th, 2014 at 12:03am
  • Vartokk

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    The one with cam was my favorite. He was so mysterious I almost fell in love with him myself ;)
    April 4th, 2014 at 05:13pm
  • TombRaider

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    You know what? I'm do damn hot thanks to this. In Love
    February 18th, 2014 at 04:25pm
  • TombRaider

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    You know what? I'm do damn hot thanks to this. In Love
    February 18th, 2014 at 04:25pm
  • Summer;

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    Oh man I need more!
    September 30th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • CountSynula

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    What the hell! How am I JUST NOW finding this?! lol I am so excited to delve into reading these stories. *does so now!*
    April 24th, 2013 at 11:18pm
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    Giveaway prize! Okay, well it's not really my kind of story, but I'll give it a go. I think the story could benefit with a few different sentence starters. It reads a bit simply with lots of "I"'s and "They"'s etc. Overall though, it's pretty well written and definitely very steamy.
    April 5th, 2013 at 04:26pm
  • KVD213

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    Just finished reading Chapter one here, very raunchy stuff. I couldn't tear my self away from the words, they intrigued me and had me practically gagging for me! (=
    March 10th, 2013 at 05:24pm
  • Silhouette

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    In the beginning, it was very difficult to really feel that she had been through any sort of adversity or that Calix felt anything for Cain. It read more like a summary, devoid of emotion.

    That being said, your writing is high quality, wonderfully well-edited, and it did later have more feeling to it.
    March 9th, 2013 at 03:56pm
  • CrimsonSlave

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    I love this. <3 *high five to the mastermind* Post the next chapter soon :)
    March 8th, 2013 at 12:00am
  • CrimsonSlave

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    I love this. <3 *high five to the mastermind* Post the next chapter soon :)
    March 8th, 2013 at 12:00am