please do update, i really did like it :) though i did feel like Hunter saying he didn't love Jake anymore just came out of no where. there was no build up, you need to give us more
Mmmmm plot. I still don't like Hunter and Jake together honestly. I'm kinda happy to see the truth come out and now we can see how it develops. I can't wait to read more.
@ BleedingHearts YOU are my favorite :DDDD If only all my readers were as fab as you are. I feel like before Hunter didn't have normal emotions... And that was one of the reasons why I rewrote in the first place. And the phone thing DEFINITELY come from personal experience, lol Thanks os much for commenting, again, stay fab <3
I always manage to drop my phone onto my face, you defiantly feel less intelligent, hahaha. I feel like Hunter is more emotional in the re-write, in the original he was very stoic, I prefer him in the re-write though :) Great chapter, I don't know if I like Devon or Jake more, hmm... <3
I just noticed that this had been re-written! I remember reading the original one, doesn't feel like it was that long ago :) Haha, I really love your writing, can't wait for more. I have no idea why this doesn't have any comments, it deserves heaps :)