Suicide - Comments

This is amazing... I could relate to her loneliness and despair in some chapters, and that's what helps give meaning to the whole text. It inspires empathy. Very well done <3

I'm surprised at how well written this is. Props for you since I rarely am surprised in a story/poem.
:)

This is beautiful. You did a great job of writing out the truth. Millions of people feel that way...and it was brilliant. I feel like so many people should read this story just to know.

aye Thug P. I love this story. I respect what you doing and what you writing about because this has happened to a lot of people and they need some type of support and encouragement.

This is beautiful and sad and so real. Absolutely amazing job. I have struggled in the same way that the girl did. You did an amazing job capturing the horrible darkness that is depression. Brilliant work, my dear.

This reminds me of the song Amelia by Tonight Alive.

I cried while reading this. Excellent job- this story really spoke to me and I could totally relate. I don't self harm or do drugs, but some days, I just want to die. This story has definitely made me a stronger person. Thank you so much.

This reminds me so much of what happened to my sister, my best friend. She was the most beautiful person, inside and out. She was always smiling. I never noticed anything wrong with her. I was with her hours before she took her own life and I didnt notice anything. I regret not realizing something was killing her inside. I regret not being there for her. I was her sister, her best friend. I still have trouble getting up some mornings, knowing I failed her and we wont jam out to Journey in her car ever again. Knowing she wont ever be with me for our birthdays. No more Christmas mornings.

If anyone reading this is considering taking their own life, talk to a friend, a sister, message me. I'll listen.
You can never cause your own destruction because someone elses life may be in that decision too.

-Loved this story.

Loved your quote from the pretty reckless :)

This was absolutely chilling. It was deep and emotional, and it was perfect.

Wow. That is all I can say for this story! It is amazing.

I think that little addition on the second to last chapter was really sweet:)

This was something. I definitely liked it. Definitely. *grins*

I can honestly say I really like this story and it kind of spoke to me. it made me think about all my friends and trying to figure out if any of them feel like this. I use to feel like the girl in the story but someone saw past my fake smile and helped me out. I hope you don't feel like this cause people do care and I may not know you but im here for you(: