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    @ FallenCreature
    I know. It's about time. :)
    April 2nd, 2013 at 07:34pm
  • FallenCreature

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    Yay, they finally got to meet!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 03:24pm
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    @ JustElissa_
    Oh sorry I just got on here and checked everything. Hmm I didn't know that. I think it was a coincidence lol. But thank you
    March 17th, 2013 at 09:01pm
  • JustElissa_

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    Sorry if that sounded mean. I'm just curious, its probably just a coincidence because they are lyrics and a picture you can find anywhere. :) sorry.
    March 17th, 2013 at 08:06am
  • JustElissa_

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    Its cool, I like where its going so far :) . But I couldn't help noticing that the cover and chapter title "my outlaw eyes have seen their lies" is the same as my fanfiction. Who knows, it could be a coincidence. But I thought I'd just say that. Anyway, your book is good so far :)
    March 17th, 2013 at 08:03am
  • FallenCreature

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    Aww, I love how protective Ashley is.
    What? CC's adorable!!!!! <333333
    March 16th, 2013 at 12:16pm
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    @ thatscalledyes
    Haha thanks doll!
    <3
    February 17th, 2013 at 12:40am
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    @ FuEnTeSpErRy;
    YES. I LOVE YOU. Okay, I'm officially stalking this story now. I can't wait for you to update! (:
    February 17th, 2013 at 12:00am
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    @ thatscalledyes
    Haha yeah I noticed that too. This coming chapter will just be in one point of view. I just gotta finish everything up before it gets posted and I even plan on trying to put the third chapter up too, which will be in CC's point of view. I do plan on making it a CC fan fic. I've noticed that too. You just definitely made me make it CC. :)
    February 16th, 2013 at 11:59pm
  • thatscalledyes

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    So hey, I read what you have so far and it's not bad but I was a little confused. It's kind of confusing when you switch from third person narrative to p.o.v. suddenly. Next time, maybe just stick with one person's p.o.v. or make the whole thing third narrative. It's up to you but it's just a suggestion. Second thing was there were a few (but not many) really awkward sentences. I don't know haha like they were awkwardly worded and weird to read so just watch out for that. Thirdly, SHE SHOULD END UP WITH CC BECAUSE CC IS MY LOVE AND I ADORE HIM. We're getting married some day. But yes, PLEASE make it CC. No one writes fan fics about CC and the ones that are written aren't very good but your story is good so please do Mibba a favor and write a kick ass CC story. I will love you forever. (:
    February 16th, 2013 at 11:51pm
  • FallenCreature

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    @ FuEnTeSpErRy;
    xD
    February 12th, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • ComAPittSHorroR;

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    @ FallenCreature
    Alrighty!!
    <3
    February 12th, 2013 at 08:25am
  • FallenCreature

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    Cute xD
    I want her to be with CC. Dunno why, just do ;)
    February 12th, 2013 at 08:21am
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    @ preciado;
    :D
    February 10th, 2013 at 08:43pm
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    @ FuEnTeSpErRy;
    Si! :)
    February 10th, 2013 at 08:39pm
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    @ preciado;
    Haha true that! ;)
    February 10th, 2013 at 08:38pm
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    @ Screaming Angel
    Thank you... CC is definitely one of the choices she has to deal with.
    <3
    February 10th, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • grayson;

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    I say CC because his so adorable. Haha. We both know who Jake is ending up with. ;P
    February 10th, 2013 at 08:38pm
  • Screaming Angel

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    It is AWESOMEEE! ♥ Hm..I think that Khloe and CC or Jake would make a good couple...
    February 10th, 2013 at 08:35pm
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