Stars - Comments

I love how the song incorporates into your story! I get it now, hehe :) I hope you do well on your school project, this is quite a well written story, you have such a rich vocabulary, and a lot does happen, but it feels well paced!

i'm from the comment swap! i really enjoyed the intro--i could definitely relate to the first two paragraphs and i liked how much description you included and how realistic it felt. it didn't have that whining aspect that you can sometimes read when someone's writing about love etc. the second chapter had an even amount of dialogue and description which is nice, it wasn't just an entire chapter of two people speaking and your writing flows very well. i like what you have so far, and good luck with the last chapter of it!

Really interesting, kind of a brief summary of a drama. Not sure I get the title though, but good job! :)