Ariel - Comments

Very cute update.
I just feel bad for the both of them since trouble is in store...

Oh my gosh, poor Ariel. Here's a girl trying to live her life even though she knows a serial killer is after her and when things finally settle down, he goes after her swim coach. I don't blame her for wanting to be next since she doesn't want to see any more people dying because of her. And poor Cody! He obviously doesn't want Ariel to die but if you love something, set it free right?

Really great chapter and please update soon! 

I have really enjoyed reading this story. It is mysterious, captivating and funny.
I feel really bad for Arielle since she has to watch her back every moment for her killer, but at least she has a great boyfriend looking out for her. I really love Noah's character and personality and he has made me laugh numerous times throughout the whole story.
Please update soon, because I am looking forward to reading more.

I really like this story
can't wait for an update!

Cant wait to see if he makes his move! Update soon please!

I wonder what her secret is? I hope she forgives him.

I really like this,
Will be waiting for the next chapter. :)

excited for more c: