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  • January Rose

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    Very cute update. Cute
    I just feel bad for the both of them since trouble is in store...
    August 4th, 2013 at 05:07pm
  • January Rose

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    Oh my gosh, poor Ariel. Here's a girl trying to live her life even though she knows a serial killer is after her and when things finally settle down, he goes after her swim coach. I don't blame her for wanting to be next since she doesn't want to see any more people dying because of her. And poor Cody! He obviously doesn't want Ariel to die but if you love something, set it free right?

    Really great chapter and please update soon! 
    July 18th, 2013 at 06:25pm
  • January Rose

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    I have really enjoyed reading this story. It is mysterious, captivating and funny.
    I feel really bad for Arielle since she has to watch her back every moment for her killer, but at least she has a great boyfriend looking out for her. I really love Noah's character and personality and he has made me laugh numerous times throughout the whole story.
    Please update soon, because I am looking forward to reading more.
    June 23rd, 2013 at 10:31pm
  • Sweet Percussions

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    I really like this story
    can't wait for an update!
    May 19th, 2013 at 06:59am
  • loveupsidedown

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    Cant wait to see if he makes his move! Update soon please!
    May 19th, 2013 at 06:27am
  • loveupsidedown

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    I wonder what her secret is? I hope she forgives him.
    May 12th, 2013 at 08:26am
  • loveupsidedown

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    I really like this,
    Will be waiting for the next chapter. :)
    April 16th, 2013 at 02:45am
  • darkaly

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    excited for more c:
    April 5th, 2013 at 12:13am