Aw I love this too omg update this as well lol. I fucking hate lisex, but it warned me about it and I read anyways, but I love this a lot and I want Jalex and lisa is gonna ruin it and ughhh. Anyways, I know it's been 5ever on this one but you should revisit it because please. <3
I am fucking obsessed with your writing. I have never read this till now and let me say, I fucking love it!! Ahh, I really hope your find the time to update this because it is amazing, seriously :)
This Story is amazing. These plotlines have been used time after time. But your story stands out mainly because of how well your language is, it just flows. Your use of British slang is effective too and the introduction of jack was creative and interesting. I cannot wait for the next chapter. Well done.