You & I - Comments

  • I really just wanted to comment. I have no idea what to say. Jackson, you're adorable, but I... can't. Chris... ugh, does any of this make any sense? Probably not. Oh well.

    I kinda ship Zack and Tara, even though they're probably really dangerous together. Oh well.
    August 16th, 2013 at 04:13am
  • I LOVE YOU SO MUCH OMG, great update, Im so into this story tho. Update soon! Much love <3
    August 16th, 2013 at 02:45am
  • I was going to comment "Yes for update!" and then I realized I also commented that last time. So... "Hooray for update!" :D
    August 16th, 2013 at 02:29am
  • Yes, for update! Jackson sounds very nice and sexy. But I don't like him for completely biased reasons. And I was excited to see what hot gif you were going to use this time and then you threw in some Hiddleston and I died.
    August 8th, 2013 at 10:10pm
  • TRUE FACTS, first time I went to play paintball I got shot in my ass and it was pretty painful because I didn't get the "wear layers" memo haha

    Okay on the two chapters that I missed!

    CHRIS HOW ARE YOU SO PERFECT. Like he is he chill about her going on a date and everything. I'm still convinced that he is totally in love with Grace.

    "I actually wanted to invite you to a party tomorrow night, I suppose you can wear your pajamas," he grinned. pajama party at Chris's house! I'll be there!

    "You'll have a great time." He said, but the words didn't back up the actions. He continued to drink his coffee and gazed out of the window in silence for a few minutes. "You could still drop by afterwards."
    See, he totally doesn't want her to go on that date. He wants to love her forever and ever. Don't go Grace, don't go!

    also, A+ NAKED CHRIS. HEYYYYY stared at that for a long moment, I did.

    So as it turns out, I'm a big fan of dates. At least when they're organized by a cute guy named Jackson.
    PFFT you just like to go paintballing with cute boys. Invite Chris, I bet he would gladly go with you naked.

    Had I agreed to a date with a serial killer?
    ha haha ha maybe

    Okay I should really stop hating on Jackson, it's horrible. I am just pulling so hard for Chris here that I am blind to how sweet and perfect Jackson truly. He is such a nice dude,

    So I shot him in the foot without thinking twice.
    She would survive the zombie apocalypse.

    I couldn't help it then, as in any awkward or nervous situation, I let out a laugh - and he kissed me.
    JACKSON IT IS THE FIRST DATE. AT LEAST GET HER SOME FOOD FIRST. Though he did shoot her in the ass so all is okay haha. He's gotta make up for that.

    Clearly I wasn't thinking straight when I looked up at Jackson.
    "Do you want to go to a party?"

    THEY ARE GOING TO THE PARTY. OH GOODNESS. THE COLLIDING OF CHRIS AND JACKSON.
    okay that sounded probably a bit more Greek War than what will actually happen but you know, I'm ready for the drama!

    I just, this story, it always makes me so happy. You write so flawlessly and I loved all the updates! <3
    August 8th, 2013 at 07:13pm
  • In the ass. Oh my crap I laughed so hard. Bless Jackson, he's just dreamyyyy. This perfect date was perfect.

    I also greatly enjoyed your memo. Switching it up a bit is a nice change but NAKEY CHRIS EVANS. I am firmly standing my ground on the face that any and all gifs that you use from WYN? are necessary. PERV BRIGADE, UNITE.

    PS. Hiddleston wears suits because he's a classy bitch.
    August 7th, 2013 at 02:36am
  • OH MY GOD! THIS CHAPTER! THE FEELS WOMEN! You don't understand what you are doing to my poor heart, it is crying from how much I ADORED this chapter!

    You are such a fantastic author and I loved the whole paint balling - getting shot in the ass - foot - kiss situation. Absolute perfection.
    August 6th, 2013 at 06:14am
  • asdfghjkl is there any hope of another update coming tonight? I just love this story and I want more I'm sorry. Kudos to you for writing this wonderful piece and just uPDATE AS SOON AS YOU CAN OKAY? OKAY.

    I don't mean to sound pushy but I'm sorry I just can't with this one.
    August 6th, 2013 at 06:05am
  • Just started reading. I love this!! It's so good and I'm excited to read more.
    August 6th, 2013 at 04:38am
  • I loved the entire paragraph on what to wear for her date and how glad she was that it wasn't a strange and fancy restaurant. The line about him being a possible serial killer had me laughing.
    Paintballing. I don't see that in a lot of fics. Nice change.
    Then they kiss and it's bittersweet. But he's got those blue eyes and a nice bod. So, of course he gets invited to the party. It'll be in everyone's face. "Yes, the date went well Here is proof. Get off my back and out of my mind." If he goes anyway...
    August 6th, 2013 at 01:55am
  • Thank you! I appreciate variety every once in awhile lol =) And there's nothing wrong with Chris Evans and nakedness. Loved the update ♥
    August 6th, 2013 at 01:07am
  • Hey, how's it going? I suck at commenting but I just wanted to tell you that I love this story, Chris Evans, and all the nudity. Please continue with all three at your soonest convenience. *Runs away*

    *Comes back* And sorry if that sounded rude and/or pushy. I meant that in the nicest way possible. Like, "If you updated with more nudes, it would please me greatly." Your writing is spectacular and I love Grace and her wittiness. *Runs away again*
    August 3rd, 2013 at 10:04am
  • If I can do something without changing out of my pajamas then it's a win. Oh God, this is my life.

    Pretty sure I fan-girled when I saw this had been updated. Like legit fan-girled. And I wasn't ashamed at all. As much as I have missed this story, the wait was definitely worth it. Was that a bit of jealousy I sensed from Chris when she told him she had a date? And how in the world will he handle meeting the guy if/I'm assuming when she brings him to the party? OH THE DRAMA. I CAN'T WAIT.

    Thanks for updating! And QUADRUPLE THANKS for the gif at the end...when I saw it I think I died. Just a little. NEVER STOP BEING A PERVERT <333
    August 3rd, 2013 at 05:50am
  • ah, great update! :D Can't wait to see what happens!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 06:15pm
  • What is it with all of the gifs from What's Your Number. Not that i'm complaining about his lack of clothing, but he does have other movies where he looks sexy. Love the story btw =)
    August 2nd, 2013 at 09:55am
  • Offended by the constant nudity in the author's note? HA!
    I could feel the awkwardness surrounding the talk of her date with Jackson. Chris' reaction was golden.
    August 2nd, 2013 at 08:08am
  • All of the pulp culture references were wonderful. Empire Records is such a great movie.
    I loved the bit about feeling Tara's eyes and frustration. It was perfect.
    August 2nd, 2013 at 08:03am
  • This is one of my favorite stories on mibba, so please keep updating, these updates make my day so much better. I can not wait to learn more about Jackson, and for him and Chris to meet because I need a jealous Chris to come out and fight for his women DAMN IT! :) keep up the great writing!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 07:25am
  • Its me again. tehe I swear, I stumbled on this by accident.

    But anyway, I think this is really funny. I considered commenting when I read the dinosaur thing in chapter one, but I figured I'd wait till I read everything posted. I really love how you're writing this, and I'm totally excited to see more! :)
    August 2nd, 2013 at 03:29am
  • OH MY GOD THANKS, YOU'RE THE BEST OKAY, ITS THE FIRST TIME SOMEOME DEDICATES A CHAPTER TO ME HAHA YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL
    August 2nd, 2013 at 03:13am