August 14th, 2014 at 07:08am
@ maplel34fs
That is true, thanks for replying to my comment and I hope you update Loosen Up really soon! I am absolutely on board for the sequel of Insane love :)
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October 22nd, 2013 at 07:19pm
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@ Reemer
It's a fan fiction, not everything is real, not every friendship is real, not every characteristic or personality is anywhere near real. I'm Muslim too, but I don't practice it, and I'm not sure about Nazem but that wouldn't affect the story anyway. My writing contains scenes that I want and have put effort in, and it'll stay that way. Thanks and I hope you'll be on board for the sequel which I'm currently working on since Insane Love is finished. Glad you're reading Loosen Up as well!October 22nd, 2013 at 02:51am -
I really like the story so far No complaints! Just one thing that kinda bothered me was that the story showed Kadri drinking and stuff but he's a practicing Muslim and I'm not trying to get you to change the story or anything but that kinda struck me as odd. Please continue though the story is really good and I am enjoying 'Loosen Up' as well
October 21st, 2013 at 11:24pm -
What I've always appreciated about this story is the humor you bring into it. I definitely giggled at the two groups having a stripper mix-up!June 11th, 2013 at 07:46am
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So glad to read such a great story about Colton.May 5th, 2013 at 06:43am
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@ deciding
"I sighed, glancing at the wall clock which read 2:26. I looked down on the creamy rug where Kabby laid flat on his stomach, sleeping peacefully." near the beginning of Chapter 16 :)April 29th, 2013 at 05:19am -
I have a very important (and by important I mean stupid) question. Where is Kabby?April 29th, 2013 at 04:49am
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Please update soon!!! I love this storyApril 22nd, 2013 at 12:58am
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:( I hope Mia is okay.April 15th, 2013 at 03:40am
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I really hope mia's ok! and she needs to tell colton! update soon!April 15th, 2013 at 02:33am
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Update?April 4th, 2013 at 07:08am
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I love, love, love this!
I#m so glad someone is writing about the perfect human that is Colton!!March 20th, 2013 at 08:13am -
this story is perfMarch 19th, 2013 at 12:34am
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this is definitely one of my favorite stories so i hope you're able to update soon!March 18th, 2013 at 04:16am
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i hope they work this out soon!March 10th, 2013 at 07:08am
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Poor Colton :'(March 7th, 2013 at 09:03pm
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Yeah, that Brown trade sucks. I'm going to miss him.
Anyway, great update! Can't wait for more :)March 5th, 2013 at 04:35am -
I never understood why. Why instead of being with a guy who finished University or a guy who is on his way towards a smart life, I wanted an enforcer who plays for my favorite team.
My favorite element of your story is that it's about the enforcer on the team. He's a different kind of player than, say, Bozak or Kessel, and so the situation and interaction between Colton and Mia is different. I like that a lot! I wish there were more stories about the league's "goons". I'm looking forward to your next update. :)March 4th, 2013 at 09:52pm -
Great update! I feel so bad for Colton; hopefully Mia realizes soon that she really does love him!February 27th, 2013 at 03:45am
Well what can I say, you have a flair for writing.
I really love how your main character is acting as hard to get. And I love the way I feel when i read the main character's emotions. How she feels pain as she see him go. Knowing her own feelings but suppressing them. It brings tears to my soul, oh how dramatic. And the way you describe the person she loves. It makes me mad but at the same time makes me feel giggly.
It takes a good writer to make me feel that way. Great job!