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  • headrushxreeta

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    Suuuuuuuuuper hot! I loved this a lot:)
    July 22nd, 2013 at 04:15am
  • Johnny Christ;

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    Oh my gosh, that was so hot. Damn you wrote that well!
    March 8th, 2013 at 05:12pm
  • heretic.

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    That was so hot!
    February 22nd, 2013 at 10:36pm
  • Tholomew's Harlot

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    Ahhhh mooore! You need to write more definitely! And I vote for more rev.. ;p
    February 19th, 2013 at 04:24am
  • aninsignificantother

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    @ Zacky Vengeance;
    Haha thank you so much! I didn't know how to end it at first but then that idea popped in my head and I thought it would be perfect! It is my first smut scene as well first one shot, I just tried to write what I've enjoyed reading in the past. Thank you for having the contest! It was so much fun to write. If you have any more contests, let me know. (:
    February 18th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • aninsignificantother

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    @ Jenna.M.Haner
    Thank you (: I think I might soon, I've been wanting to write a lot, for now I think I'll be entering a few more contests before I get back into the writing groove. Thank you so much for the banner, you were such a big help!
    February 18th, 2013 at 10:43pm
  • Moriarty;

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    Oh wow I loved that ending! With Matt finding her bikini bottoms...that would have been so awkward to explain! Hot smut in the ocean, damn girl how could that have been your first smut scene? Somehow I don't believe you...but no of course it was wonderful- I loved it! Thank you for entering :)
    February 18th, 2013 at 07:44pm
  • Jenna.M.Haner

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    Woot! First comment!
    You really need to write more often. I loved it!
    February 18th, 2013 at 02:23pm
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