@ Jinxling Thanks so much for the awesome comment! ^_^ I think I speak for both of us when I say we love this story so much, and it means a lot to me at least to get such amazing comments (: I'm glad you like our very cheesy Pharisees!
I love it keep posting when you can! Reminds me of a book I read once and loved and really I am so excited for the next one and hope your writer's block is kicked in the butt soon. :)
I love this. I can't imagine the embarrassment, I probably would've hit him. It's definitely not like anything I've ever read before. I can't wait to read more. Please update soon!! =)
" And now I'm lost and no one will ever find me because I was bad an didn't listen to Mama. "
'an' should be 'and'
Then there is " I star to scramble to my feet."
'star' should be 'start'
Like I said small misspelled words nothing major. Oh and I never knew faeries were called Pharisees, that cool to know. (p.s. sorry if I sounded nit picky)