My Captain - Comments

I really love this story, I think it's fantastic and is just so well written. One of my favourite Torchwood fics ever. keeps up the brilliant work! :)

@ DressedInDecay
Aw it's okay, I just wanted to tell you before someone else does and on the internet some people tend to lose their heads over tiny mistakes. :)

@ GlasgowXsmile
Thanks for pointing that out to me. I'll go ahead and make that change. It's a bad habit, but I tend not to go back through and reread what I've written until much later down the road. >_< I'm trying to be better about that.

I actually started reading the first chapter and I still haven't finished but I want to leave a comment to say calling a woman of color, a colored woman isn't the proper way of describing us woman of color. But anyways I'm off to read the rest because your writing is very entertaining and I like the Captain so I am down for this story.

edited: Love every chapter so far, and lol Owen. You write down Owen so perfectly.

@ DressedInDecay
You are quite welcome! And oh god, that new chapter, just... hnnng. You have a way with words. I really wish I could write as well as you. You capture the characters so wonderfully. And the smut. Oh how I love the way you write your smut.

@ angelevermore
Thank you! There's definitely MORE unf to come! And I'm glad you love it. Makes me love writing it! ^-^

@ flitterboom.
Haha. I'm glad I don't disappoint! :D I've been writing stuff like that for about nine years now so I would HOPE I've gotten good at it! :P

O-Oh god! I just read chapter fifteen and just, all of my unf. I can't wait till the next update! I just recently found your story and I have to say, I absolutely adore every bit of it!

15) Let me just express for a moment how glad I am that you can write good, believable naughty scenes, and not just awful ones that don't flow at all. I am just... thrilled at learning this.
The trenchcoat was a good move. That would be super hot.
And just Jack, man. He's so... UNF.
I'm glad she could forget her anger toward him and replace it with lust. Was not a disappointment. c;

14) Horray for the Doctor *dances*
Wonderful explanation as to what actually happened to her. You've really got this alien-planet thinking down.
Jack is really gonna have to do some groveling, man.
and let me just say... ijustreallylovealloftheowenscenesbecausewow.
i just love that little guy.
Neeeext.

13)
WOW I CAN'T FUCKING BELIEVE JACK. JUST WOW WOW WOW HE BETTER HAVE A FUCKING PLAN
As for these Yundre fellows, that was a nice twist, cannibalizing their own kind and shit. Whew, that was just... Wow. Yes.
Okay, onto the next.

Uuuuugh, a little nagging voice in the back of my head told me that was coming. Once Jack asked what he needed on his planet, I was like, "Well, shit."
But still, wow, awesome descriptions of everything-- the voice the creatures (*shiver*). I'm just hoping the others are okay since they were "terminated".
Just give me mooooooar.
At you own pace, of course. c:

@ Black Cat
:3 Thank yooouuu! I love that people love reading this. Because I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE writing it. And I'd probably write another chapter right now if I didn't have to go to work. Boo.

I love this story. You're such a good writer. Keep it up! I look forward to these updates!

Raaaaah, yay, okay, I'm glad things got cleared up, but wow, that was a really intense story about her being changed, and it's really different from how most people think getting changed would be like. For one, it was a completely public, crowded place, so that must have been, like, a full blown attack.
Wow, that other scene with Jack and the walking blood-bank and the hand cheek thing. Just wow.
Okay, now that everyone seems calm again, let's see some alien actioooon.
And aw, you didn't have to mention me in the author's note. I'm just glad I can motivate you because this is hands down my favorite story on mibba right now.

Yeeees, Oweeeeen.
(he's actually my faovirte on the show). I'm so glad he's starting to be not such a royal prick. I mean, he always is, but I'm glad he's probably just gonna go back to his normal prick level.
but aw, that was uncalled for. Like, yeah, bad memories and feeling interrogated and stuff, but like... Tosh. So cute. So nice.
/: I know that it's probably super difficult being "special" and shit, but she's gonna need an attitude adjustment, if she wants to work for them.
Then again, I don't think she really wants to. *shrug* we shall seeee.

*crying* wow, can he please just shove her up a wall and just... UGH WOW. OKAY.
that shower scene really just, like, filled ME with tension.
and, I think it's very wise she didn't tell them about Marty. I think Jack might get... not jealous, but wary about someone else knowing about her, you know? Hm.

Okay, I'm actually going to comment for every chapter to make up for my absence.
So, wow, Marty actually seems really nice. Like, he was kinda shady at first, but now I really like him and I kinda hope we get a bit more of a story out of him. Nnng.
And, of course, Jack goes looking for her. Intrigued by the half-species, or smitten? Hmm. c;

Seriously, two updates in one day? You're spoiling me.
Ugh, and I know Jack's totes gonna forgive her. I mean, it's Jack, and they're gonna have to find her again or whatever.
Wow just, ugh, wow.

@ DressedInDecay
I would definitely by that novel. Original fiction and all. I would.

@ flitterbloom.
Yeah, I kind of have an idea that you want more. Which I have no problem whatsoever in indulging you in!

I <3 Kat. I've actually been working with her as a main character for eight years now. I'm working on writing a novel featuring her and her life. I just... asngkjasgn I adore her. :3