Spiderwebs - Comments

This one-shot was absolutely fantastic.
One question... why did you end it with the line "The smallest one took off his hat." ?
In respect would be my guess, but oddly enough, it leaves me quite confuzzled
^^

Lol puts any and all of my story writing to shame.

You have now become an object of my jealousy.

Congratulations.

Love
Valentine

The way you wrote this story was so amazing. It was almost poetic and so compelling. The description... wow. Jesus.

You're fucking amazing, you know that?

I love the plot, and the ending when he is shot was heart wrenching. I love the idea and story of a woman who has lied for longer than she told the truth, you portrayed it hauntingly. I felt for her and the man when they finally found each other, and as I said already, their ending was tragic. The best ones usually are.

I love you :arms:

An absolutely amazing story,
It took me by surprise and that almost never happens.
Great job.