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  • liar's lane.

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    how does this not have more comments? I love this. the writing is so believable. it's not ridiculous, it actually makes sense. I'm so excited for this story. you need to update! that's an order!
    June 15th, 2013 at 09:12am
  • thecitylights

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    update omgg
    May 13th, 2013 at 12:35pm
  • crossed out name.

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    op this was even more lovely the third time i got to read it op op ~~~final draft status. can't wait for the next chapter since i just helped you plan it op op op good things yup go go write them tomorrow in class okay? okay.
    BUT FORREAL OKAY DADDY JOHN WOWWZZZ WHAT'RE PANTS?
    April 23rd, 2013 at 06:36am
  • Lucille Ball.

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    As always, totally in love. I'm excited to see how this all plays out. And perfectly done on the whole step-parenting kind of thing. Totally feel that way most of the time when I see my mom with her boyfriend. Really, really related to that! Totally stoked to see what happens next!!!
    April 23rd, 2013 at 04:17am
  • everdeen

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    Ruby is so cute and John is a good father, he's there for her, that's what matter
    April 6th, 2013 at 04:43am
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    wait, is jawn gonna take off his pants soon?
    April 3rd, 2013 at 11:40pm
  • crossed out name.

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    OH THIS STORY IS MAH FAVE OH MY GAWDDDD. LYK JAWN IS SO HAWT AND NOW HE'S A DAD I JUST SOB.
    AND OMG SARA WHATTA BISH LYK SRSLY

    ARE CELESTE AND JAWN GONNA GET MARRIED? DOES RUBY GET A SISTER OR BROTHER SOON? ;) ;)
    April 3rd, 2013 at 11:39pm
  • everdeen

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    I want to know more about Celeste! The Sara/John/Ruby situation reminds me of Derek's in "One Day" (great book, terrible ending). In one way I think Sara is just disappointed and wants him to be the best father he can be to her daughter, in another way I guess she's a bitch because she wants
    March 25th, 2013 at 06:43am
  • State Of Grace

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    Well that was extremely awkward for Celeste. I'm sure Sara isn't really as bad as I felt she was in this chapter but my gosh she is something. But I'm sure she has reasons for that I love this story, can't wait for the next update!
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:55am
  • tonightlites

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    I'm glad you're updating this again.
    March 16th, 2013 at 05:55pm
  • tessie

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    love this :)
    March 4th, 2013 at 09:26pm
  • xonyoursidex

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    i want more! i need more! haha
    March 4th, 2013 at 09:08pm
  • Lucille Ball.

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    Oh man! I do remember this being something I enjoyed forever ago! I'm so excited now!!! YES! Keep em coming.
    March 4th, 2013 at 09:57am
  • everdeen

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    You write well, I like it Very Happy
    March 4th, 2013 at 05:46am
  • crossed out name.

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    OH I'M SO EXCITED. YOU SHOULD UPDATE DIS LYK ALL DA TIME, HOMIE.
    March 4th, 2013 at 03:32am