July 12th, 2013 at 11:13pm
Demons They Follow Me - Comments
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Omg! This entire is a badass(in a good way lol). I love how you manage to put a special line in every chapter that just amazing. Your writing is something that I personally think is one of legends. The way your writing captures the reader and doesn't let go until the way been on the ride of their lives is something not too many people have and I do believe you have it all the way. I love this story and your writing, please update soon.July 12th, 2013 at 05:09pm
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@ Amanda_Cullen
lol yeah it's been awhile. I'll probably update soon at some point lolMay 31st, 2013 at 04:15am -
Please update this soon!May 31st, 2013 at 04:08am
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That was a sad ending. I know Jimmy will get her back. I can't wait for the next part!March 11th, 2013 at 11:05pm
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Oh nos! No, she can't give in to Angelo.... Noooo I loved it!March 11th, 2013 at 10:38pm
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I loved it, Kriss's dad is just being rude! Update soon please!March 11th, 2013 at 09:54pm
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Wow...I hope they can get the rest out of the jail. Some hell is about to be laid down.March 9th, 2013 at 03:10pm
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God's a dick (Things that you think you'll never say) Please update soon, I'm going insane here!March 9th, 2013 at 12:31pm
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@ aaron hotchner
I shall ^^ thanks so much for the comment ^_^March 9th, 2013 at 02:44am -
Oh no...Please update soon.March 9th, 2013 at 02:15am
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@ x19blakey93x
it was three months since Jimmy asked her to MARRY HIM, she was TWO months pregnant, and Again I know about the grammar because I am Dyslexic and border line develop mentally delayed, I don't offense to your comment and don't mean to come off like I do, but honestly speaking, I am perfectly aware of the issue with grammar because that's not going away, But what hurts me is that people assume that if I was capable of using good grammar that I would still post with the awful grammar that is used, It's all good though, as long as you like the story and the plot that's what I'm aiming for, I do hope you continue to read and Apologize for any confusion that you had. Thanks again for reading and commenting , I hope you continue to read, Much Love hun <3March 8th, 2013 at 10:23pm -
So, I think this plot is really interesting, and I'm curious to see what happens next. However (and please don't take offense to this, it's just constructive criticism) your timeline is out of whack. In one paragraph you went from "it's been 3 months since..." But she was only 2 months pregnant....after reading this, it's technically been 6 months since she got pregnant. Also, grammar :)March 8th, 2013 at 09:45pm
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@ aaron hotchner
lol thanks hun ^_^March 8th, 2013 at 03:14am -
I loved itMarch 8th, 2013 at 02:00am
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@ aaron hotchner
Thanks hun ^_^March 7th, 2013 at 04:33pm -
How cute!!! I loved the update babe. He finally asked her, yay! I loved it and can't wait for another update C:March 7th, 2013 at 04:33pm
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@ Imaginary_Dreamer
LOL C:March 6th, 2013 at 02:40pm -
@ aaron hotchner
lol you never knows :P lolMarch 6th, 2013 at 02:38pm -
I can't believe that...Lena showing up! Oh I hope Lilith takes and beats the crap out of her for doing that!!!!March 6th, 2013 at 12:57pm
Wow thank you so so so much for this amazing comment, it means so much to me. I've continued the series on from this one lol. I'm not sure their quite as good as this one but thanks just the same. it means the world to me -big hugs- ^_^