This was haunting and amazing! I really, really loved this story. The narrator was such an interesting voice because they seemed almost insane, like they were a psychopath, when in actual fact it's what most people feel like doing to their exes. The scary part comes with the intensity of the writing, that makes the reader (or me, at least) feel like the narrator is actually going to do it. It's not written like an empty threat, which leaves the reader with a slight chill. Overall, it's beautiful and brilliant and I love it. Such an amazing entry.
September 10th, 2013 at 08:07pm