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  • pocahontas.

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    Finally I was back and able to finish this! Sorry it took me so long. I powered through everything after chapter five because it was seriously amazing! Although the later chapters were a tad disappointing in the way that some were super short, I loved how film/telly like it seemed. In my mind, I was able to imagine everything perfectly due to the way in which it was written. The characters, though some developed better than others just slightly, were phenomenal. I can never stomach 1D fictions, but this was amazing - finally, something in which they didn't need each other to stand as characters!

    In all honestly, Jocelyn was my favourite and I think a follow up or prequel just of her could definitely stand alone. Great job x
    March 2nd, 2014 at 10:17pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    :D <3
    December 22nd, 2013 at 05:02am
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    Awe! Bye, favorite couple. ;D
    December 20th, 2013 at 11:40pm
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    :D
    December 18th, 2013 at 11:09pm
  • writing_wrongs

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    I'm really sad there's no louis :(
    December 16th, 2013 at 06:35am
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    Jocelyn is my favorite; btw. ;p
    December 15th, 2013 at 02:40am
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    GAH! THAT WAS ADORABLE!!!!
    October 13th, 2013 at 01:11am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    I'm sure they'll kick ass. ;D
    October 12th, 2013 at 12:59am
  • crazy.sexy.cool

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    I love it! Mia and Zayn are too cute (:
    October 12th, 2013 at 12:36am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    YES! And now we wait for the end of the year. SO HELP ME GOD, IF SOMETHING HAPPENS BETWEEN THEM BEFORE THAT, I'LL BE COMPLETELY SOUR IN MY COMMENT! I PROMISE!
    October 10th, 2013 at 10:14pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Gasp! She sang?! For realz?! Awe! Yay! PROGRESS! :D
    September 12th, 2013 at 11:15pm
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    Gasp! She sang?! For realz?! Awe! Yay! PROGRESS! :D
    September 12th, 2013 at 11:15pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Gah! I love Mia & Zayn. They're so cute!
    So I'm guessing that Niall is mentioned but doesn't exactly have a love interest? Cuz I was thinking you could write some funny things with him and his love for food. :p Just an idea.
    September 12th, 2013 at 03:57am
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    Yes; let's hope Lana is a true friend and can avoid letting the cat out of the bag. :D
    Man, forget Cassidy! Who cares if everyone thinks Zayn and Mia are laughing stocks. It should only motivate them more to kick ass. :D
    I'm rooting for Ava to get over her fears. Go AVA!
    September 11th, 2013 at 09:28pm
  • pocahontas.

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    I'm on chapter five and I have to say, this is very interesting. No part of me has any drawing to One Direction or any of the members, but the titled had interested me. This is a co-write so I am pleased with how alike you three sound, though not so much with how disconnected it seems so far. There doesn't seem to be much connection between the three girls, which made it hard to follow chapter four back to chapter one, and makes it seem like three different stories. (Just a bit of constructive criticism.)

    Overall, this actually seems really good and I'm pretty excited for it.
    August 5th, 2013 at 08:23am
  • dnciz4evr

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    I wish Mia would just admit to Zayn that she's totally okay with whatever he did and she's not still mad. ): But I love all the collabs going on between the students. Harry's and Ava's is probably more exciting to me than it should be, but hey. haha. Also, Liam and Jocelyn. ugh. I know they can't, but they should just get together and that's that. haha.
    I love this, a lot! I like that it's not the same as most other 1D fanfics (like mine, bleck.) It's so original and very intriguing!
    July 27th, 2013 at 12:05am
  • timetoresurface

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    I didn't expect to Like this story but it's the best story about 1D I have ever read!! This is so much fun and every chapter surprises me :D xx
    July 26th, 2013 at 06:03pm
  • hearts;

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    Oh no, I really want Harry to hear Ava sing. You're keeping me in suspense and, quite frankly, its killing me! WHY?!?!!!
    June 9th, 2013 at 03:21am
  • blades

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    AH, I loved that chapter. Brilliant!
    May 13th, 2013 at 04:13am
  • let's make a mess.

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    Loved the new chapters Very Happy
    May 10th, 2013 at 10:25pm