Dirty Little Secret - Comments

Loved this story... Took me two days to read I was so hooked.

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I thought this story was going to be a mundane, cliche sort of story, but it's actually written quite well. There are different layers to each character that make them feel real and tangible rather than just some fantastical person behind a screen. I like the way you did that, and you also made the relationship between Cori and Tate realistic by having them hate each other at first. The progression of the relationship is pretty smooth from what I've seen so far, although the kiss was a little abrupt, but I haven't seen any other bumps in the plot yet.

The only negative feedback I can give is probably to proofread before submitting. You have minor mistakes such as 'there' when you should be using 'their'. Or you write 'should of' which really isn't a word since it should be 'should have'. Avoiding contractions will help you with the 'should of', 'should have' problem.

Other than that, it's a very believable story (from what I've read so far), so kudos to that. Always proofread, and finally just keep writing. Good luck.

CookieMonster

Hello!

I just wanted to tell you how much I am really loving your story. I have only read about five chapters so far, but you can certainly count me as a fan! I know you said that you are editing your work, so that I am not going to say anything about the minor errors here, and there. . It's just that when you are finally finished with the whole thing, it would be a work of art! I can just feel it! ;)

I am loving the chemistry that is developing between Tate, and Corinne! It's just such a sweet thing to watch. This concept is something that has been done so many time, but you make it kind of unique as well. Haha . . do trust me when I say this, because if you have watched as many Indian movies as I have, you would know exactly what I am talking about! Anyway . . I would be continuing to read this, and actually am going to recommend & subscribe to it right now. Thus, I could continue reading it at my own pace!

I like the fact that the outfits are shown, as I am somewhat of a person that lacks the imagination about that sort of things. I find myself using 'Google' to find out what many authors mean about different styles of clothing, as I am not into most of those stuff! I also love the sweet 'author's notes' that you leave at the end of each chapter. Btw . . cute alligator at the end of Chapter 5!

~ Verona :)

Oh my gosh, this is the end! I'm so sad (since I love this story) but I loved the ending. It's amazing how far Tate and Cori have come. At first I thought they would end up killing each other since they had so many differences and not many similarities. Not to mention they had completely different personalities that just clashed. Bu they saw past those differences and saw something that no one else did. He saw a shy, trying to be heard, hurt little girl and she saw a broken, sad, and desperate for actual love boy. I’m so happy that they worked out their problems and became such a sweet couple.
I loved this story and the ending was amazing.

I just want to say that I loved this story so very much. I actually checked my email frequently for updates, and I would be super excited when there was one! I'm gonna miss this a lot!! I must now reinsert myself into reality, and try to loosen up my tie with these characters. Omg. I loved it.

Awww great to end it.:) i absolutely loved this story and will probably read more of your stories. Keep the great work! :)

I loved this story.. The ups and downs, the drama and love. I just loved it! I enjoyed the way you wrote the characters and how it all played out. Awesome job, keep up the wonderful work!

I'm only a few chapters in, but I really like your story.

Gosh.. I loved it! This story was and is amazing. I can't believe that it's over. I'm completely heart broken but happy at the same time. I didn't want to end but here it is, and it's totally beautiful. Now my attention is turned to Pretty Girl. (:

I always feel the need to comment on things I like because I know it makes the writer smile but I have no idea what to say... I just adore this :) Can't wait for the next update.

I've been reading since you posted the last chapter and I have to say i've laughed I've cried gotten pissed off but most of all I've fallen in love with this story!!!! Mostly pissed at my internet connection just fyi. You are an amazing writer! & I read most of the authors notes the hippie redneck thing cracked me up!!!
Ang

Oh my gosh, how sweet! I'm so glad that Cori didn't die because that would seriously suck! I'm so happy the baby is okay and well. And it's a boy! (I was kind-of hoping for a girl though...) And Jackson is a cute baby name.
I can't believe this story is almost over though. One more chapter... :(

Ermahgawddd! I thought you were really going to let her die for a second, and I was about to start my search to beat you with a stick. Just like I said I would. And when she woke up, I was like OH MY GOD!!! Yeah.. I totally spazed.

Aw!!i dont want it to end!at least they are both in good health! Love it!

Jack Daniels? Like the whiskey? Hahahaha, how cute.

Ahh baby Jack.. :) Please update soon! It was rude to end that way! hahahahahaha :)

Oh please update soon! That's just cruel to leave us with an ending like that xD

Cliff-hanger!!! What happened, I want to know!! Update soon.
Oh, and I'm SO happy that she said yes!

boooooo

CHAPTER 52 POR FAVORRRRR

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm dying from the cuteneeeeeeeeeeess