HI I’m here for a comment swap. Well first off I love your layout, it’s very clean cut and easy to read. I always hate when people have crazy layouts and I can’t even read the story! Anyway, I am totally digging this story, i love the whole mysterious theme going on, and I want to know what’s with this house. If it’s so dangerous why can’t they tear it done? Aha, I’m sure we’ll find out later in the story, but great work! I can’t wait to read more of this story! To give you more feedback I’d say to possibly add more information. I kind of felt like I was just dropped into the story, with no background kind of information. Sometimes it’s good to give more information when doing a story like this. I guess I’m just the person who needs more detail, and other people are different with that. I also noticed you can tend to get pretty repetitive, and that’s not bad! I mean I get like that too! And that’s the struggle when writing from a characters own POV. But all of this aside, I can’t wait to read more of this! I’m totally subscribing! Please keep up the good work and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
February 26th, 2015 at 08:42am