Caraphernelia - Comments

@ FanGirlGoneWild
Well I'm glad you liked it c:

@ Forgotten Blasphemy
that's ok, I knew if it were me I'd want someone to tell me so yer but for the most part I liked it :)

@ FanGirlGoneWild
My writing confuses me too :c and I was actually hoping for actual criticism! So no, I don't anything you said was rude or nasty c: and yea, I fucked up with the P.O.V.'s a lot because im used to writing Kellic so some parts I put like vic instead of Mike and such. but thanks c:

I don't mean to sound rude or nasty but your writing confuses the fuck out of me because of your spelling and grammar, but I think you just need to proof read a little better, also I noticed a few of you P.O.V's were a bit mixed up and stuff. Like I said I'm not trying to be mean or to stop you from writing because your plot is good and I think you have talent, It's just some constructive criticism to help you improve :)

@ Forgotten Blasphemy I meant sequel by update :p I should have guessed it wasn't clear at all that I meant that >< sorry

@ jagksexual
That was the last chapter, I planned on doing a sequel, just not yet.

Please update!

Thanks love c:

oh my god these chapters are amazing

Awh don't worry dear, I'm working on the sequel as we speak. And look out for Chapter 11 and 12 I'll have it up soon, and it seems everyone LOVES chapter 12 :3

Yay tonys back omg what?! only 3 chapters left noooo this cant end its to perfect to end

omg the hollywood undead reference in chapter 2, just fucking done ahah

Awww:(

Yeah i know he's an ass :c that's why I based him off of my ex...the asshole part that is.

Awww poor tony:( and ugh that asshole sebastian

tony no :'(

@ imtosmarttotalktogod
Awh thanks love c:

I absoultley love this story its amazing how has no one commented on it yet