Kiss This Bedwetting Cosmonaut Goodnight - Comments

  • soccerDoRk

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    Haha wow, Laslo is a name I haven't heard in a LONG time. I love the tone of this, Dom is so fucking awesome. And the intro is one of a kind. Seriously, in all the hundred of stories I've read, there has never been an incident of first meeting someone and their cock.
    July 17th, 2013 at 11:10pm
  • swell

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    Thank the lord, I am so glad this is not a one shot because the way you ended it, it was so final and I was like NO THIS CAN'T END but I checked and it isn't and thank god.

    I absolutely loved this. I couldn't stop grinning the whole time because Dom is just one annoyed mofo and Christina's just like 'shut up Dom you just need to get your cock sucked real good' in this cute kind of way idk. AND LASLO OH GOD I LOVE HIS NAME. What a boss name, but if I ever hear that in real life, I'll be like, 'did you get your cock sucked by a girl named Christina?' (yes that's how sad I am anyways) I love the way this is written and I especially loved the beginning, because I thought Dom was going to suck Laslo's dick, but it ends up being something else entirely. Omg, and I also love that other than sucking dick and picking up abandoned puppies is knitting. Two completely opposite hobbies but they made me laugh all the same.

    Did I say how much I loved this? Because I do.
    July 12th, 2013 at 03:34pm
  • oh bear

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    Wait I can't tell if this is continuous or not because the first chapter ended with like a bit of a sense of finality, I guess, the way a one-shot might have ended. Or I'm just tired and not reading properly. Either or. Okay I just checked the Info for this story and it appears it is unfinished so I hope the boy kisses happen soon. ;)

    WAIT IF THIS IS INSPIRED BY THAT BRAND NEW SONG AND YOU HAVE THAT IN THE SUMMARY DOESN'T THAT MEAN LASLO (cute name btw) IS GOING TO DIE WHAT IS THIS WHAT. Also Laslo Cervenka sounds like such an innocent embarrassed lil cutie pie and I feel like Christina's in the process of corrupting him and Dom is going to like corrupt him entirely. I love how you write/Dom narrates and idk I've always been meaning to comment on SOMETHING of yours and I guess this is it and I'm going to go find more ok good job, you.
    July 11th, 2013 at 04:10pm
  • laredo.

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    Oh my fucking God, this story cracked me the hell up. I was dying already in the first paragraph. The entire time I was just like "UGH FUCKING LASLO."

    Seriously, I can't even give you a proper comment because I thought this was hilariously fantastic. The narrator is funny and so judgmental that I just can't stop laughing. "This lanky tree-like fucker is taller than me. God, I hate him." I CANNOT.

    This is great, omg.
    July 11th, 2013 at 05:17am
  • crowning.

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    You made this humorous and intense within the first sentence. I'm loving this.
    July 11th, 2013 at 04:21am
  • capheus

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    lmfao I read the first sentence and kind of just started laughing. I don't know if that's what i'm supposed to be doing, or if you wanted that to happen but I don't know I just couldn't do it. XD I'm sorry, i'm going to compose myself and finish this comment.

    zomg LASLO IS A CUTIE.
    lmfao Though all I can think of is Camp Laszlo from Cartoonnetwork File

    I think this was great, there was a lot of emotion (mostly a pissed off feeling) and it just made me smile. I kind of now know where the title comes into play, just kind of. I really liked this though. c: Subscribiiiiiiiiiiing. tehe
    July 10th, 2013 at 10:35pm
  • archivist

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    fucking laslo.
    that's really hard to type.
    but yes, it is a great name. :o
    this entire chapter,
    was awesome.
    July 10th, 2013 at 06:49am
  • elsmyth

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    I am completely intrigued. I really like the way you write and I'm looking forward to reading more :)
    July 9th, 2013 at 10:50pm