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  • somethingbittersweet

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    oh wow. this is really really good. very misterious and intriguing and just plain simple. good job really :)
    March 19th, 2013 at 11:29am
  • Bubblegum Pops

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    this is really good. I don't usually read original fiction. But this is great! :)
    Too bad it's only a one shot. D:
    Keep it up!
    March 9th, 2013 at 12:57am
  • wishful;

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    Oh, I've never read anything like this before and I absolutely loved it! I thought that a fic about a boy watching a girl would've been boring but it wasn't. Your writing style fit the setting really well and like what RealTalkProject said, the pacing was perfect; it wasn't too long or short and ugh...the ending? Awwe. I can't-this is going on my favourites list c:
    March 8th, 2013 at 11:30pm
  • realtalkproject

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    I really liked this! It was different and the pacing was just right. Poor girl... Fantastic job (:
    March 8th, 2013 at 06:33am
  • GoodGirl;

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    This is amazing!!!
    March 8th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • triforce.

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    This is honestly one of the best stories I've read in a really, really long time. Your writing is just overall elegant and I can't stop reading this over and over because it's so beautiful and addicting and I love you so much for writing this.
    March 8th, 2013 at 03:31am