Oh, I've never read anything like this before and I absolutely loved it! I thought that a fic about a boy watching a girl would've been boring but it wasn't. Your writing style fit the setting really well and like what RealTalkProject said, the pacing was perfect; it wasn't too long or short and ugh...the ending? Awwe. I can't-this is going on my favourites list c:
This is honestly one of the best stories I've read in a really, really long time. Your writing is just overall elegant and I can't stop reading this over and over because it's so beautiful and addicting and I love you so much for writing this.