Kissing Four-Leaf Clovers - Comments

Finally here to judge The Modern Love Song Contest.

The layout, I simply loved. It was warm and beautiful, and even matched the setting you had in the story, which I appreciated.

I don't know if it's because I read this one after your other entry, but I felt this one had less impact than the other. I just noticed similarities and parallels between the two stories. Like how the main female character is sort of hesitant about the relationship they're in, but eventually comes around. Even still, this story is so beautifully written and well thought out. From everything to how the characters are interacting with each other to simple things like explanations about their clothes. And, you have a gift for writing sex scenes. There's no awkward phrases and there's just so emotion put into it. I'm extremely impressed.

I didn't notice any grammar or spelling mistakes, so good job on that!

You did excellent on this and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!

@ airplanes__

Thank you

First of all, I loved the layout! It definitely made this an easy read and not something people grudgingly read because it has their favorite celebrity in it. Secondly, I loved the story. You're a great writer :) Recommending!