This is great, everything you write is. I didn't even read Austlan until I came across Keen On Boys,and now you have me hooked. Can't wait for an update :)
I'm obviously a big Austlan fan considering I think I've fangirled and commented on every chapter of Keen On Boys lol. But anyways you're an amazing writer and I can't wait for chapter 2!
This is an extremely interesting start. You're third person is pretty good, so you don't have to worry :) I really love how Justin is all motherly & such. It makes me smile. I can't wait until the next update :D
first sub and comment, woo. I like this story so far and I like your writing. you write Keen On Boys, right? I think that's you. anyway. I adore that story and I like this one so far. <3