Apartment 10A - Comments

I remember reading this a few years back when I was new on Mibba and I remember knowing much I loved it. But rereading this again, it takes me back. :')

I love your writing style, from the narration to the dialogue. I am in love with every little bit. I find myself chuckling and smile like an idiot just reading this. Like when they first meet, there's just a chemistry there that I adored reading. I love how you wrote Alan, especially in that beginning scene. Also, props to you because starting a fic can be tough but you made it seem so effortless. I was immediately hooked by the first paragraph and I could not stop reading, even if I tried.

Austin is literally the cutest human being in this one shot? Like, Alan is also up there on the cuteness scale but there's just something about how you wrote Austin that makes him so lovable. Like the washing machine, the cookies, him talking about Alan in band practice, everything. He's so precious.

The one critique I have is that I noticed you have a lot of run-on sentences. I've noticed that there were a few times that a sentence could have stopped and another one started, but it didn't bother me too much. I think it fitted Austin's character and him having such a crush on Alan.

Overall, this is the most amazing thing I've read in awhile and I'm glad I decided to reread it again. :)

This is beautiful, I absolutely loved it xD

This is beautiful, I absolutely loved it xD

This is beautiful, I absolutely loved it xD

this is perfect omg

Perfect ;-;

@ whalecum
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

daww that was so cute

@ eric halvorsen
You're welcome and yay!!!

@ fiction246
Ah thank you, i'm glad you liked it! :3 I'll definitely have to write some more when I have some free time.

OMG I love it!!!! They are both adorable :D you should definitely write more of this!!!!

@ aswesleepwewalk
Awww, thank you i'm glad you liked it! I'll definitely have to think about doing more, everyone seems to want it :)

Ugh this was perfect. It'd be amazing if you wrote more, I was dying at the cuteness.

@ eric halvorsen
sweet!:)

@ x6methsaday
It's just as it is at the moment, maybe when I have some free time i'll write another one or turn it into a chaptered story :)

@ eric halvorsen
No problem c:

@ eric halvorsen
Are you going to continue it? :p

@ owlval
rkegjhre thanks! <3 I'm glad you liked it!

@ x6methsaday
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

OMG THIS IS SO CUUUUTE!!! I LOVE IT WOWW!!!