Here Lies - Comments

@ Miss Vampire Is Dead
Totally I agree fully I mean comment is what make me want to write more and I want to know what people think of my work. I have alot of one shot and small stories that have no comment it make me sad.

@ M Shadows's Girl

I know, it's a huge pet peeve of mine. Subscribers and readers don't motivate me like comments do. I mean, I came here to get feedback so I could be a better writer, not so everyone could just read my stories and be silent, yeah? xD

@ Miss Vampire Is Dead
Yes there so many stories I love that I written but when time come for comment alot of people just read it and don't comment

@ M Shadows's Girl

No problem; it's difficult to get feedback on Mibba, isn't it? :/

@ Miss Vampire Is Dead
Thank you for your comment. I was doing a Drabble by request of a friend. It wonderful to hear good deback. So thank u very much. u made my day, made me feel better about my writing

I thought this was really well written, I like how there were details of emotion that were really emphasized on, I feel like that's important in a story that is centered around the death of one (or in this case, two) character(s) and the affect they had on the associated character.
I feel like there could have been more detail of the fights that went on between them, and what exactly it was he said or did to drive her to the edge like that. It would have created more emotion in the reader, and engrossed them in the story a bit more.
Overall awesome story; I've love to see more as I'm kind of excited I'm not the only one here writing Loki stories :)