Cats And Romance - Comments

  • keigo takami.

    keigo takami. (205)

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    I remember reading this right around when I joined Mibba, so I'm remembering how much in love I am with this one shot, you have no idea.

    I love how you wrote Alan. I can definitely imagine Alan getting excited to see some cats. And Austin, oh my god, his idea for proposing to Alan is the cutest thing ever. I love that it's unique and it fits Alan, so it doesn't seem too far out from his character. Even the choice of the cat, I love that everything was thought out! I loved that there was a good balance between narration and dialogue. It's more of a "me" thing, that I get sometimes picky with fanfics lol. But it's just nice because I can easily imagine Austin putting the color on the kitten, Alan being ecstatic being surrounded by cats, and the proposal.

    The only critique I have is that you needed to space out your paragraphs. It just makes it a bit easier to read and it's not as overwhelming for a reader such as myself to see a huge block of a paragraph. But overall, this was such a cute one shot and I'm glad I found it again. In Love
    March 20th, 2019 at 11:21pm
  • LEdFullmetalkid

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    This is so cute and sweet that I might just die!
    March 7th, 2014 at 09:08am
  • jagksexual

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    So so so cute I loved it!
    June 27th, 2013 at 11:05pm
  • fiction246

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    OMG so cute :) I love it!!!
    March 28th, 2013 at 10:51am
  • m0riarty

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    SCREAMS THIS IS SO CUTE AND ROMANTIC AND ADORABLE I LOVED IT AH
    March 23rd, 2013 at 12:41am