I remember reading this right around when I joined Mibba, so I'm remembering how much in love I am with this one shot, you have no idea.
I love how you wrote Alan. I can definitely imagine Alan getting excited to see some cats. And Austin, oh my god, his idea for proposing to Alan is the cutest thing ever. I love that it's unique and it fits Alan, so it doesn't seem too far out from his character. Even the choice of the cat, I love that everything was thought out! I loved that there was a good balance between narration and dialogue. It's more of a "me" thing, that I get sometimes picky with fanfics lol. But it's just nice because I can easily imagine Austin putting the color on the kitten, Alan being ecstatic being surrounded by cats, and the proposal.
The only critique I have is that you needed to space out your paragraphs. It just makes it a bit easier to read and it's not as overwhelming for a reader such as myself to see a huge block of a paragraph. But overall, this was such a cute one shot and I'm glad I found it again.
I love how you wrote Alan. I can definitely imagine Alan getting excited to see some cats. And Austin, oh my god, his idea for proposing to Alan is the cutest thing ever. I love that it's unique and it fits Alan, so it doesn't seem too far out from his character. Even the choice of the cat, I love that everything was thought out! I loved that there was a good balance between narration and dialogue. It's more of a "me" thing, that I get sometimes picky with fanfics lol. But it's just nice because I can easily imagine Austin putting the color on the kitten, Alan being ecstatic being surrounded by cats, and the proposal.
The only critique I have is that you needed to space out your paragraphs. It just makes it a bit easier to read and it's not as overwhelming for a reader such as myself to see a huge block of a paragraph. But overall, this was such a cute one shot and I'm glad I found it again.