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  • M Shadows's Girl

    M Shadows's Girl (100)

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    LOL Ya, I love David Draiman but there nothing on this site for him at all and it suck I want more david. It is sad but his new band is freaken awesome

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    March 27th, 2013 at 03:14am
  • Daughter Monster

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    Ok, um.. yummy... Lick I haven't seen any David Dramian fics on this site yet, so this is definitely cool... so sad Disturbed is on hiatus. ANYWAY, I thought this was well written. I think the paragraphs could have been spaced a bit more and the story also moved a bit fast; don't be afraid to add in little details and imagery that really gives someone the feel for where the characters are located, what they see, how and what they feel, ect. I loved it, I'd like to see more Weird
    March 27th, 2013 at 02:53am