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  • Strange Sort Of Evil

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    Here from comment swap.

    I really didn't expect too, but I loved this story! You've made it so easy to relate to how the characters are feeling and your details are superb. The plot is so original, and it's so hooking once you start to read you just can't stop!

    I think this is a great story, you've certainly done a fine job with it Cute
    June 7th, 2013 at 05:33pm
  • Can you not.

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    @ Raised.Oregon.Style
    Thank you so much(:
    May 31st, 2013 at 02:40am
  • German13

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    I really liked this story!!! It didn't seem to have any grammar errors at all, and I love how I could just imagine how Chris is feeling. There aren't many stories that I can connect with! Your writing style is really good, and very descriptive! Thankfully not over descriptive though!! I will continue to read(:
    May 31st, 2013 at 01:22am
  • nymph

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    @ Rat Head
    Lol it means we wrote it the right way! Thanks :D
    April 30th, 2013 at 04:27pm
  • The Sun at Night

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    :O
    April 29th, 2013 at 04:56pm
  • Rat Head

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    You two are the murderers- you're killing me here! I think I held my breath the whole time I was reading this and I'm pretty sure I had a mini-heart attack also.
    April 29th, 2013 at 01:52am
  • RosiePosie08

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    This is amazing!
    April 29th, 2013 at 01:16am
  • Rat Head

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    Oh god. There it is. The chapter I've been dreading.
    April 28th, 2013 at 09:50pm
  • Can you not.

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    @ Sweetest Insanity
    Why thank you(:
    April 26th, 2013 at 02:56am
  • toobadsodead

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    I have to say, I didn't quite know what to expect from this story when I first saw the title and then the layout. Once I read the summary though, you pretty much had me hooked. I love assassins, though I can't really write for them, and it seemed like you guys would have a pretty good plot going. I stopped after the first chapter to comment, of course, but you certainly don't disappoint! So far, you seem to have good grammar, a background story planned out and good detail, along with the notion that you're sure where you're going with it. I honestly can't wait to read more!
    April 26th, 2013 at 01:20am
  • Rat Head

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    Aw man! I thought they were gonna have a roll in the hay! (see what I did there?)

    I enjoyed Chris' horse-riding experience though- I was a rodeo queen back in da day myself. And when I say back in the day, I mean elementary/middle school.
    April 25th, 2013 at 08:35pm
  • The Sun at Night

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    Love the layout, by the way
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:01am
  • The Sun at Night

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    Love the layout, by the way
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:01am
  • The Sun at Night

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    This is beautiful :)
    April 22nd, 2013 at 02:01am
  • Can you not.

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    @ Rat Head
    Oh you<3
    April 20th, 2013 at 10:09pm
  • Rat Head

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    I have been scanning my emails meticulously for a notification of an update for Brontide and here it is! Fabulous, as always. Seeing this soft sweet side of Chris makes him even more lovable, but I'm hanging off the edge of my seat, waiting for the day Chris will be outed as an assassin. I'm looking forward to it and dreading it all at the same time.
    April 20th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • Rat Head

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    Awww! If I could marry this story, I would- I love it THAT much.
    April 10th, 2013 at 07:25am
  • Can you not.

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    @ Answering.Alexandra.
    Thank you so much

    It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside hearing from you guys like this(:
    April 9th, 2013 at 05:59am
  • Answering.Alexandra.

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    Ohmygosh.
    I feel terrible.
    I haven't even commented on this story, and I've been reading it since the first chapter. D:

    Sorry guys!

    Anyway, I just want to say that I really am in love with this story. I adore the suspense, the tension, and the mystery that Chris gives off. But I also enjoy how oblivious Rae is to everything around her. I know that she'll eventually find out, I just wish that she realized it sooner. It just kind of freaks me out. D:

    Nevertheless, this is such a great story, and it deserves the best of attention and admiration. I look forward to reading more. (:
    April 8th, 2013 at 02:54am
  • Can you not.

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    ...:D
    April 5th, 2013 at 02:37am