oh my god! This is blooming brilliant absolutely loved it!!! Everything is so well written and I just love Jefferson as a whole his character is very well presented !
April 11th, 2013 at 10:02pm
My looooooooord.
Your descriptions are too perfect. Your adjectives and comparisons. Teach me your lovely ways! ... heard her laugh tinkling like china. That is one of the most beautiful descriptive phrases I have ever read.
And the sheer emotion you give to Jefferson. All of the conflict and emotion and thoughts are just brilliant. I was completely drawn in and held captive the entire time.
You are quite a fantastic writer. C: