Innocence - Comments

  • peach kitten

    peach kitten (165)

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    I did not expect this kind of story from this photo but that's what I liked about it. The reference to Little Red Riding Hood as her alter ego was very interesting. The one thing that she loved in life, her mother reading her that story, became what she turned into. This Red Riding Hood killer because of her father's abuse.

    Though I didn't like the way she lied to the police when she killed her dad but I understand that it lead to all the other events.

    The writing is this was very well written. There seemed to be no errors to me. :)

    Thank you for entering my story and you'll find out today if you won.
    April 6th, 2013 at 09:31pm