October 10th, 2013 at 11:10pm
The first line, there's sat and then the next line has is, so there's a shift in tenses. kinda threw me off. just pointing that out.
Matt in a goddamn police officer outfit...just....ok.....wow....
i really enjoyed the lead into the sex scene. You didn't dive right in and kept the imagery up there. You painted such lovely pictures of what he was doing to her.
The details of the punishments were great....i loved every second of it.
I really am lost for words. this was so good and had me squirming in my seat...
great work!!!
I mean Matt as a police officer if that wasn't hot enough then we add the whole bdsm into it the mix oh my Jesus. Calling him "officer sanders" has to be the hottest thing ever.
I've said it before but Arianna you have great description you set up the scenes perfectly I wish I could write like that.
Great work girl can't wait to read more of you're stuff that's me set for the night :)