My Sister's Husband - Comments

AGGGGHHHH how could Brian let Michelle get in between him and ash -_- Dont know who to be pissed at more Michelle or Brian.. Well loving the story so far Keep it up Update more!! :D

I am going to HURT Michelle if she doesnt get away from Brian and leave him and her sister alone. I am glad that Ash is leaving the baby needs it, and before she tries to come back she should call Val and make sure that Brian and Michelle arent together and if they are i will personally go into my computer and do some damge to her. Cant wait to read more, Update soon.

Ohhhh I know that baby isn't his, and Ash I'm gonna be very dissapointed if you let her get between you two, and the same goes for Brian.

Michelle needs to leave before i jump in my computer and beat her to a pulp. They were geting along and everything was fine and then she had to come into the picture. Cant wait to see what Ash is going to do because not one pregant lady plays nicely at all. Cant wait for update.

I KNEW something was bound to go wrong! The meeting with the Haners went way too well for things to stay good! Thanks for updating!!

What the fuck!!!! haha now we got Michelle back as some crazy bitch. I want to read more!!

MORE!!!

AHHH! Update soon please. I'm in love with this story! :D

Doesn't Brian know that he can't go against pregnant women minds??? Lol I'm glad Papa Gates saw he was wrong :) and apologized to her :)

I LOVED this chapter. The beginning made me laugh because my sister asked me to do the same thing for her since she is pregnant and can't reach her feet. I can't wait until they get married and have this baby. Can't wait for the update

Absolutely love your stories!! I love how you show both Brian's and Ash's sides of the story and am so glad he finally broke it off with Michelle. They both truly love each other I just hope Brian's parents see that!! The suspense is killing me update it!!! :D

BOOM! Go Ash go Ash go! This entry was amazing! What's going to happen next?!?!

Love ash. for speaking her mind i would have done the same thing if my patents didnt approve of my boyfriend. Cant wait for the next update

You go Ash :D I love her :D but poor Brian :( his parents are unfair. They didn't know her to be saying that about her.

I'm glad you're updating again. You're work was some of the first I started reading and I simply enjoy it and cannot wait until the next update! :)

~Wolfy~

Loved this update can't wait for more. I really can't wait for the baby to get here. Please update soon

Great story so far - hurry with the update!!

Looking forward to your next update! I will forever read this story. I am happy her and Arin are able to be friends and that things are working out slowly. Update soon? :)

Mega sperm :P I'm glad Arin continued being her friend :) and that was a mean thing for Michelle to say but well she's not a good person. I'm glad they are happy :)

Pretty please update this again!