GAH i was so so into her yelling at him for being a tool like i was so routing for her and getting all pissy cause he was being a douche and then you had to go and throw that kiss in there man you knocked me off my feet!! it was way way way better than i imagined!! <3 absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!! gah! and im just as corny as loli i remember dates like when i first met my boyfriend, when he first called me beautiful all that corny stuff i LOVE that she does that!!!!!
OH my GOSH!!!!!! Just wow, I'm at a loss for words, I'm completely IN love with this story, this should seriously be written as a book, the turned into a movie, so I can buy both and obsess over it OBNOXIOUSLY!! thats how amazingly in love with this story I am. really, this should be a published book! LOVE all of your characters, carter just sounds mouthwateringly gorgeous, ashelle and Lolita both sound stunning, the plot and the twists! UGH you have me aching for more please please update soon and I'll be your biggest fan for live and become increasingly involved with this story, I can't wait to see where carter and Lolita end up and what secrets he's hiding just gahh update soon soon soon!!!!!
Still in love with the story but now I just want to know more, he didn't really give much away and she now has to wait more, ugh. But I cant wait to hear what he has to say.
Love it more and more. So im assuming that Carter had something to do with her parents and brothers death, that's going to be heart breaking for her. Im also wondering if the pack that kidnapped her are the ones that burnt down the building or was that something to do with Carter(I hope not, hes already going to be on her bad side)? BUT I cant wait for more of the story to find out all my questions!!