Dear author, I will gladly take this story's comment virginity. I really like this and the basic idea. It would be better if you added more to the summary to grab the reader's attention and if you added a layout even if its a premade one from the layout section on the stories. If you need help with it let me know. Anyways, I have subscribed and I'm waiting for more. :) ~Marian.
~Marian.