Aw, this story made me cry! lol! I swear I felt everything that Tyler felt during the last couple of chapters, so it made me cry. lmao! It's a good ending and a fantastic prequel. I'm honestly scared to read the sequel, so I just wanted to leave a comment, and wish you luck on the sequel!
This is my absolute favorite line.. "It was that he knew he liked her a lot, he liked her more than a lot. He liked her enough to lie to her." - Chapter 6. Heartbreakingly beautiful. lol.
I am so happy with the way you ended this. You have it a happy ending without breaking from the emotional density of the story and I just think you did an absolutely fantastic job. Seriously, round of applause!! I can't wait for the sequel. Just so you know, the ending actually had me in tears lol I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
I totally forgot to mention that while reading chapter 9 when you first uploaded it I had Timeflies playing on my computer. And their song 'Tonight I can't say no' came on and I thought it fit this story perfectly! You should check it out sometime!
I have mixed emotions about this chapter. It was so good and I love that Tyler went after her! But at the same time it was really sad and I just wanted to shake some sense into Kellin. You better start cracking on the sequel 'cause I don't know how long of a wait I can handle for more Kellin and Ty!
@ lucky13_93 Hahaha, thank you so much for you love and support and to let you know, I'm watching the Bruins game too. I just had to post this. Don't hate me but I'm born and breed a Caps fans so this game is so painful for me.
OMGOMGOMGOMG! Just so you know, I actually am reading this DURING the Bruins game. You don't know me, but that's HUGE! Lol I'm obsessed with this story, more than I care to admit. I'm like in shock with this chapter, you totally caught me off guard. And your amazing writing only added to it. Seriously. Just in awe right now. So excited that you're making a sequel, I don't mind waiting! YOU ARE AWESOME AND SO IS THIS STORY
I don't want this story to end, like ever. It's by far my favorite TS story! I really, really hope you do a sequel. How you set up a sequel all depends on how you end this story. For example, if you end this story before Ty and Kellin reconcile then you could have the sequel be all about how they get back together. Or if this story ends with them making up, maybe the sequel could be about them taking the next step as a couple and moving in together and whatnot. It all depends on how you want to end this story first. I'm sure whatever you decide to do will be great!
As for ideas for a sequel, it all depends on where this story ends up. I haven't the first clue about what you have planned for this, but as it unravels further I will most definitely try to feed you some possible ideas!
AH! NO!!! She was so happy and they were so adorably in love!!! The fucks the matter with her?!?!? Lol you've got me so bummed out right now ;) and you wanna do a sequel or a million sequels, I'll be reading em!!
Okay, Kellin. You know Ty would never EVER do that to you. I know you're scared but come on, girlfriend. Calm down, take a deep breath and a shot of Jack and go back to talk things out.
Ahh the ending was so sweet and cute even if she didn't say 'I love you' back because we all know she does. Can't wait to find out more about Kellin's past. Also, did not expect to see Mike make an appearance that way. I always kind of figured he's be more the mopey, heartbroken, please take me back kind of guy. But I really like how you played out that scene. As for Jacob well, I never like him to begin with, but I feel like he'll continue to be a problem for Kellin and Tyler.
I don't even know where to start with this one!!! I can't believe she decided that Tyler was all she wanted. It made me so happy! Lol really though, I love that they're finally opening up to each other, even if it's painfully difficult. And I LOVED the long chapter!! Never apologize for that :P I can't wait to see where this goes!! Great update :DD
So good! I think this may be my favorite chapter so far. I'm dreading the inevitable drama and craziness that is to come, but at the same time I cant wait for it!
NOOOOO :'( THE BEGINNING WAS SOOOOO PERFECT!!!! Lol I'm heartbroken! She needs to stop pushing him away lol but it wouldn't be a very interesting story if she didn't I guess :P I somehow get the feeling she's going to party it up without him and break his heart. I'll cry. LOVE this story and this update <3
I meant the sequel. Whoops!