Coffee Republic - Comments

Love it, only the joker would sing be my baby lol

FINALLY, I come back to mibba after so long, and then you update, it was fate. Wonderful filler. Cannot wait for more.

I was so surprised when I saw that this was updated. Kinda makes me want to update my story -that I haven't in forever-
I reread this and I can't wait for a new update. :)

You updated crossroads :D maybe you'll update this again?

Ok, this story is pretty amazing. I'm always wary of Joker fan fiction for fear that the Joker's personality is way off and he would do something out of character, but I didn't feel that way with this story.

I love your writing style too. You make it so easy to get lost in Avery's world. I was constantly on the edge of my seat through this story. I love how you describe the characters and how you show their relationships with each other. You make this story so exhilarating.

I can't wait for the next chapter! (And Avery sort of annoys me too, but I can also find her character very sympathizing, if you put her situations into perspective.)

Oh no! Is something going to happen to her family? They're at the parade! I like the issue between her mother and her. I want to know more of the back story there. You have some really great imagery here. I loved the description of the picture burning. It's amazing. This was a nice little chapter. I'm interested to see where this goes next.

I like that she's ignoring everything to find out if this is Joker. My only question is why did she feel the need to follow? Was she curious? Is she fascinated? There was also a part where you seem to switch into the Joker's view. This isn't a problem, but it was a little off because everything else was in Avery's perspective and I had to go back and read. Overall though, I'm interested to see what you do with him being so calm and keeping her alive. I do wonder if it's the real Joker because she hadn't seen his face. When he laughed because she said Batman was dead that really amused me. Joker's always in the know and I thought that was a great way to show his character.

Sorry, about the double comment. The second chapter was really interesting. I like the whole parade thing going on. I'm curious as to what trouble Avery is going to get into since she's following the color. Nice job!

I liked this first chapter. I also worry a bit about characters, but Avery was really nice to read about. I enjoyed the way you described her life, yet kept everything flowing. That was really neat!

I liked this first chapter. I also worry a bit about characters, but Avery was really nice to read about. I enjoyed the way you described her life, yet kept everything flowing. That was really neat!

Oh, how I love this story. What a lovely update, :)

Love it, oh god Avery shut is goin to get crazy in the next chapter anyhoo dearie can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

As always, awesome update. I can't wait to see the next one. I think you're doing an amazing job doing dialogue for the Joker! I always imagined him swearing too! lol.

Oh Avery what was u thinking, saying the Joker tried to rape u yeah get over yourself princess, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I literally cannot believe you're only thirteen, it blows my mind.

I can't wait for the next update. This story is so great. Great imagery and I love how well you write for the Joker, that my friend is a hard thing to do!

Yay, I love this story mucho grande :) Update soon!

What great reading this has been so far, have enjoyed it.

Gosh, her Mother is a real piece of work, but he Brother sounds so cute.

Looking forward to the next updqte, you write the joker so wel :)

oh my god that scared me so much, like whoa that's an actual fear of mine so ahhh haha. thanks for updating! it's great and I'm so exctied for the next one!

Jesus lady finally!! Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)