Coffee Republic - Comments

Hate to be a butt, but FINALLY! Lol thanks for updating

Oiy I missed this story! So glad to see it updated.

luff

I mean what does she expect to happen she had an encounter with the Joker of course people r goin to feel sympathetic I mean it's amazing tht she is still alive, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I really love this story. Update soon!

love this just started reading. can't wait for an update!

Lovely update, doll-face. :)

Beautiful imagery in this chapter. I especially like the line about her yawn being like the unraveling string of a sweater. I seriously love pieces like this where it's someone doing every day things but their mind walks a mile a minute and it just comes out beautifully here. :)

Oh Avery u done it now its as if u want the Joker to find u I mean damn can u at least fabricate it so tht the Joker won't have to kill u I'm just saying anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Something tells me Joker won't like what she's writing too much.... But wow, I love this already!! Can't wait for another update :)

Anticipation is building up, can't wait for the next update!

Oh gurl, I love it when you update. I cannot wait to see where you go with this. I only had one issue with this,

behind him in an unintelligable scrawl.

The White Knight
Shone so bright
That he scared the Big Bad Bat away.

I would say nearly unintelligible because if it were unintelligible she/we wouldn't be able to read it.

Update soooon.

Hey, first of all let me apologise for taking so long to comment on this story. I promised you this yesterday after all.
Anyways...

Your character Avery is very well written. The amount of description you've included about her is amazing. Making it really easy to relate to her and get into her mindset, to see the world from her point of view.
The one thing I really liked about this story, is the fact that you made me feel emotions towards the different characters. Which is something quite powerful because if you can make someone really feel for your characters then all you need is a really good plot line (which you have) and you'll have a really epic story.

Now, I'm not sure whether you use a beta or whether you check it over yourself but I didn't find any faults with spelling or grammar. Which, is a big shock. Usually people have at least one or two per chapter but you don't seem to have any in all 4 of your chapters.

Also, you have a very wide range of vocabulary which is always a good thing. I'll definitely be looking at your other stories.

Courtney xoxo
P.S - Congratulations for winning my competition, I should be holding another one next Sunday at the same time :)

Love it, well tht was an interesting parade can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

sooo good:)

sooo good:)

I keep reading Avery's name as "a very" and it makes me laugh. Haha. xD

I really like how you describe things in your writing. Like "Harvey Dent Day was lying in tatters on the floor". It just sounds so eloquent, the way you write.

Yay another Joker fiction :3 I love this so far!!

I am so excited to see where you go with this. My only complaint is if you're sticking to the Nolan-verse Batman the Joker never called Batman 'Bat-brain' that was only the comic book one. That's a very little factor but it's one that sticks out a lot to me. Otherwise, can't wait for an update.

This story is pretty awesome so far :)