Love it, yeah I agree Joker was rather odd and not his crazy self u kno, but it was a good chapter tho can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
U did it again lady!!!! It's only been two chapters and I love it already....and my i say tht I don't like mom at all like she is a complete bitch don't get pissed off becuz I was suppose to meet u at the fuckin parade ten mins ago u should be happy tht I showed up and this whole begin disappointed in Avery becuz she had a lot of jobs but never had stayed for a long time is bogus u should just be glad tht she had a job in the first place damn lady...this is y I don't like being the oldest too much responsibility on my part so if I fuck up parents will always remember it and bring it up again and again and have tht look of disappointment, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
First off, a well written Batman story is so hard to find so this just kind of made me so damn happy. I have two complaints though. Is Avery English/British or something because as far as I know nobody in America calls money 'notes' and they don't call bangs 'fringes'. I only ask that because it feels weird reading a story set in Gotham that is set in America with phrases like that. Also, the guy who plays The Mayor, Nestor Carbonell isn't wearing eyeliner he just has very dark eyelashes. :)
Okay, so you already know how much I love your writing, and when I saw you were writing another Joker story I got super excited. Everything you write has such a nice flow to it, making it very easy for me to read. And I love Avery's character so far. She just feels really relatable, as I too have a habit of sticking to routine. Haha.