Sorry that it's taken so long for me to get around to commenting on entries! -_- Firstly, I really like the simplicity of the layout. That has nothing to do with the story, but I just had to point it out. But, about the story, wow. This was fabulous. It was short but sweet and had so much emotion behind it. Like, I could feel the pain and sadness behind the words. Especially the ending which broke my heart. My favorite part was your use of 'dragon' to represent the heartache he was feeling the whole time. The way you described all of it was wonderful. I really liked this and thank you for entering it!
Firstly, I really like the simplicity of the layout. That has nothing to do with the story, but I just had to point it out. But, about the story, wow. This was fabulous. It was short but sweet and had so much emotion behind it. Like, I could feel the pain and sadness behind the words. Especially the ending which broke my heart. My favorite part was your use of 'dragon' to represent the heartache he was feeling the whole time. The way you described all of it was wonderful. I really liked this and thank you for entering it!