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  • Eggrolls

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    @Luna Rey.
    Thank you for your feedback. I probably could have left that bit out, huh?
    When I first started this story, I didn't plan for a sequel. I didn't really want to do one when I finished, either. Now that I re-read it and think on the matter, I'm not going to rule out a continuation for this one. But I really don't have any idea what I could write it about. The point of the story was more on Julian's growth as a character, and less about Gerard or Conor or anything after the end.
    If I did write one, I'm afraid that it would come out like many of the other stereotypical celebrity daughter stories, where nothing of real importance happens and it's basically just droning on and on and on. I don't want that, so I can't give a total answer anymore about if a sequel will ever happen.
    August 28th, 2013 at 08:49pm
  • Luna Rey.

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    I really enjoyed this. I don't normally read things like this, but this was pretty awesome. However, your author's note in the last chapter let me down. 'Conor and Julian do not get back together.' Very disappointed, I would rather have left that to my own imagination, seeing as you're not writing a sequel anyway. Other than that, good story.
    August 28th, 2013 at 07:15pm
  • JaxxMonster

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    i love this story, sad that your not going to make a sequel.
    July 11th, 2013 at 05:35am
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    @Name Of Misery
    Thank you. I find that stories I read that go on for much too long lose my interest fast. I guess I do that with my writing, too.
    May 9th, 2013 at 05:52am
  • Name Of Misery.

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    This was really good. I like the fact that you didn't stretch it out too much and left it like that.
    May 9th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • zombieoctopus

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    This is just amazing!!
    May 6th, 2013 at 02:36pm
  • limexpopsicle

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    I love this! :)
    May 6th, 2013 at 01:27am
  • Apocalyptic Sunshine

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    I love this story so much! I think you are an amazing author. I am really looking forward to an update!
    May 5th, 2013 at 07:19am
  • hotmidnightstar

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    Loved the new chappy. Glad to see LynZ wasn't going to be bitch, and Jimmy was actually helping. More please!
    May 5th, 2013 at 05:50am
  • zombieoctopus

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    Jimmy!!!
    May 2nd, 2013 at 08:30am
  • Eggrolls

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    Thank you everyone for the comments.
    Hotmidnightstar, I can't tell you that without ruining anything.
    Honestly, I just write the chapters on the fly. I know certain things that I want to happen, but a lot of the points in the story are from me flying on the seat of my pants. So, it'll be a surprise for both of us ;)
    May 2nd, 2013 at 01:10am
  • Name Of Misery.

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    I like this!
    May 1st, 2013 at 09:21pm
  • hotmidnightstar

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    Ok, I'm gonna ask this and hope I don't sound like a dumbass. Being that Jimmy Urine is in the same band with Gee's wife, is he going to be a help or a hindrance?
    May 1st, 2013 at 07:16pm
  • GeeAfuckingA

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    Awesome updates! :D
    April 30th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • zombieoctopus

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    Your story is absolutely amazing! The concept and the writing, it's just wonderful to read. Keep writing <3
    April 29th, 2013 at 09:44am
  • gore.92

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    this story is amazing keep up the good writing :)
    April 29th, 2013 at 09:00am
  • gore.92

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    this story is amazing keep up the good writing :)
    April 29th, 2013 at 09:00am