Uprising - Comments

@ rava_ananaso
Aw maybe one day, when I have time :)
btw I thought about pronouncing Braiden Bray-den and Elijah Eh-lee-ha. But that might just be me.
<3

Braiden and Elijah, I don't even know how to pronounce those. D:

But aw! I hope everything had turned out okay! Write that sequel soon please!!

I love you too! <3

@ lanaphernelia
Thank you!! Yes, I had a school trip to NYC and a couple of exams the week before, so I just ended up having to cut it short :( But I really thought about doing a sequel, like a long one short or a five chapter story, if I ever get around to writing that.
This really give me confidence in my writing, being a little frenchie and all :P Thanks again ;)

Well, this one shot was quite descriptive which I liked and the plot seemed interesting, but it got third place because the end made me want to know more and I know you didn't have much time since you had to go somewhere? But all in all, I liked it and it has potential to become an actual long story later if you choose to do that. :) Good job!